I am curious to get your take on this one. It is kind of a leaf abstract, or that was my intention when making it. Feel free to say if it does not work for you, I won't be offended.
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Posted by Robert Dayton on November 8, 2009 at 2:35 PM
It's all right, but not one of your best. That said the colors work well and it is
abstract for me.
Posted by Eric Good on November 8, 2009 at 4:21 PM
I'm particularly drawn to the right half and might prefer a vertical crop of just that side. I like the roughly equal distribution between the clumps of leaves and openings on that side.
Harley,
I guess I'm just drawn to a little chaotic scene, but I love this. The floating leaves and thin branches create abstract, but interesting lines to me. It just gives the impress you are standing in the middle of the forest. The back lit colors look great. Best Regards.
I like the scattered randomness or "chaotic" definition of the scene, Harley. At first I thought maybe the cyan in some of the BG was a bit strong, but upon further review it all looks good in that respect as well. No doubt the back lighting is what makes and holds the scene all together here. Nicely captured.
Posted by Lon Overacker on November 10, 2009 at 1:25 PM
Harley,
I'm torn with this one - it borders on too much chaos or something abstract enough to hold on to. I too am drawn to the right half, but that little horizontal cluster of yellow on the left pulls me back over.
I like what you saw and tried to capture, but a bit too much for me. Sorry dude.
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abstract for me.
I guess I'm just drawn to a little chaotic scene, but I love this. The floating leaves and thin branches create abstract, but interesting lines to me. It just gives the impress you are standing in the middle of the forest. The back lit colors look great. Best Regards.
I'm torn with this one - it borders on too much chaos or something abstract enough to hold on to. I too am drawn to the right half, but that little horizontal cluster of yellow on the left pulls me back over.
I like what you saw and tried to capture, but a bit too much for me. Sorry dude.
Lon