Hey Preston, this is very nice again. Overall, at least from what I see on my monitor, the post processing is better then the first scene(s) you had from this general area. I also feel your angle of view here like the previous one(s) seems to flow nicely on a diagonal from the URHC to the LLHC. The post processing, film, scan, light, camera field adjustments and the overall combination provides very good detail with the general rock formation and structure. I'm not sure if it's my monitor or the change up in film you used, but the red/orange seems pretty strong, but I'm sure you verified that with the original. Otherwise, "printer-up".
Posted by Lon Overacker on November 12, 2009 at 4:53 PM
Preston,
I pretty much echo everything Paul just wrote. Just about everything in this image is better than your previous image (I believe these were also taken on different days and different times if memory serves me correct.) Like Paul said, from processing to presentation, this one works very nicely. I even think the comp and arrange of elements is better. The semi-round dark area makes a nice resting place for the eye. Looks great! I'll look forward to seeing a print one day.
Lon
Posted by Harley Goldman on November 12, 2009 at 6:44 PM
PB,
I really like what is going on in the bottom 70% of the image. I am on the fence about the top right corner. I will have to look at this more, especially on my home monitor (if I ever get my computer back from the shop). The processing and presentation are spot-on! The colors and detail really pop nicely and look great. Your web presentation is definitely working.
Posted by Dan Baumbach on November 13, 2009 at 12:50 PM
It's funny. I like the first one better. I have trouble with the processing and color of this.
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7 repliesTachihara 4x5
180mm Fujinon
Fuji 160 Pro-S (Color Negative)
10/06/09
Your comments are always appreciated.
-P
I pretty much echo everything Paul just wrote. Just about everything in this image is better than your previous image (I believe these were also taken on different days and different times if memory serves me correct.) Like Paul said, from processing to presentation, this one works very nicely. I even think the comp and arrange of elements is better. The semi-round dark area makes a nice resting place for the eye. Looks great! I'll look forward to seeing a print one day.
Lon
I really like what is going on in the bottom 70% of the image. I am on the fence about the top right corner. I will have to look at this more, especially on my home monitor (if I ever get my computer back from the shop). The processing and presentation are spot-on! The colors and detail really pop nicely and look great. Your web presentation is definitely working.
- Dan.
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-P