Hi
One shot from today evening
1dmk3+500mm
about 90% full frame
Posted by Craig Jones on November 25, 2009 at 4:18 PM
Lovely action captured here,more room to the right would have been brillant but sometimes its nice to break those compositon rules BG needs leveling/ccw ,lovely action
Posted by Chris O'Reilly on November 25, 2009 at 7:23 PM
Isn't it normally the drake that does the chasing?
This is a 'nearly' shot for me Marek - great feeling of action but my enjoyment is interupted by the lack of detail in the drake's head - it is too dark. Maybe selectively lightening this area would help?
I'm afraid this doesn't work for me Marek. I find the composition awkward though I can see where you were going by wanting the water splash in shot. If the idea is to illustrate the duck chasing the drake (?) then I would need to see more of the duck. As Chris mentions, there is a lack of detail on the drakes head and in particular I cannot see the eye which for me will always kill an image. Again as Chris states, a nearly shot and one I would keep in my head to try to improve on.
Robert
Posted by David Sewell on November 26, 2009 at 4:46 AM
So nearly there, a little rotation counter clockwise and some extra detail in the head are all it needs. Personally I am not worried about the lack of room on the right, worth it to have all that churned up water behind the bird.
David
Posted by Mike Smith on November 26, 2009 at 11:44 AM
This really needed a good dose of in-fill flash to countract the head shadow and the harsh side lighting- and the flash would also have put the crucial highlight into the eye.
I doubt if any detail in the head can be lifted successfully in PS or equivelent processing.
Shame there is no wing movement to go with the bathing action - it looks a touch wooden as is
Posted by Ian Mason on November 26, 2009 at 2:41 PM
Composition is fine by me and the low angle is great. Shame about the shadow on the head - this happens with my shots all too often
Discussion
6 repliesOne shot from today evening
1dmk3+500mm
about 90% full frame
This is a 'nearly' shot for me Marek - great feeling of action but my enjoyment is interupted by the lack of detail in the drake's head - it is too dark. Maybe selectively lightening this area would help?
Cheers,
Chris
Robert
David
I doubt if any detail in the head can be lifted successfully in PS or equivelent processing.
Shame there is no wing movement to go with the bathing action - it looks a touch wooden as is