You know me Graham, unless it's an Elephant, Pigeon or Sparrowhawk I'm useless
Steve
Posted by Mike Andrews on December 13, 2009 at 10:31 AM
Great shot of the bird (whatever it is), but my eyes just get drawn to the pebbles. May be worth putting in a layer and making them less prominent.
Posted by Dave Courtenay on December 13, 2009 at 10:36 AM
Might be worth trying to selectively lightening the eye area and maybe even putting a small catchlight in,Fill Flash would have been the answer here-Maybe Santa will bring you a new book-i know i have some under the tree
A tuch of fill flash woud have been the answer here just to lift the darks that little bit with the added advantage in that it would have added a little catchlight to the eye. the control of the DoF is great with a very nice fg and bg but I feel that there is far too much negative space at the top, given the bird appears to be looking in a downwards direction it cries out for more room there...
HTH
Phil
Posted by Chris Jones on December 13, 2009 at 4:23 PM
Nice fore and background, but please know your subject.
Regards Chris
Posted by Major Gilbert on December 13, 2009 at 6:09 PM
Good low POV Stepehen and you caught momentarily having a nap I think.
Just the addition of an eyelight needed to make the image.
Major.
Posted by Andy Shepherd on December 14, 2009 at 5:15 AM
Really like the ruffed up feathers on this one Steve, some good advice has been given and I can't really add to it, nice one.
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12 repliesSteve
MKIII 500f/4 plus 1.4x 1/500 f/5.6 ISO 400 (Wimberely head & pod) minor crop
Thanks Nigel, my ID on birds is about 'some much', especially these little ones!
Steve
You know me Graham, unless it's an Elephant, Pigeon or Sparrowhawk I'm useless
Steve
Dave
A tuch of fill flash woud have been the answer here just to lift the darks that little bit with the added advantage in that it would have added a little catchlight to the eye. the control of the DoF is great with a very nice fg and bg but I feel that there is far too much negative space at the top, given the bird appears to be looking in a downwards direction it cries out for more room there...
HTH
Phil
Regards Chris
Just the addition of an eyelight needed to make the image.
Major.
Really like the ruffed up feathers on this one Steve, some good advice has been given and I can't really add to it, nice one.
Andy...
Nice pov and a shame about the light but what can you do. I also would take a little off the top and the rhs
Cheers
Andy
Ian