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Whooper Swans

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Posted by Craig Jones on January 14, 2010 at 8:01 AM
Whooper Swans
Whoopers Swans captured flying over farmland to their overnight roost site on the North-West coast of the UK.Not much space in the frame but I wanted to try and convey the close up beauty of these birds in flight and also their organised manner in which they fly so close together.

All Comments And Advice Welcome

Techs;
Nikon D300
Nikon F4VR600
F8,1/500
iso 400,+0.3ev
Matrix
PP-CS3,Full Frame,No Crop

Thanks For Looking :wink: :wavey:
Posted by Andrew Parkinson on January 14, 2010 at 8:05 AM
Hi Craig

Nice light, tight group, body position and sharpness but I think a lot will comment on the space at the top. It doesn't detract for me but I think you could stand to lose a little of it though I do love the pinky hues

Cheers

Andy
Posted by Craig Jones on January 14, 2010 at 8:17 AM
Thanks Gents and here's one I perpared earlier as It does suit the 'Pano' theme very good but not a great lover of cropping if I can help it,thanks again :wink: :wavey:
Posted by Ian Macdermott on January 14, 2010 at 8:24 AM
Hi Craig,

lovely shot sharp and a beautiful background colour :toast:

I like the second one better :smile:
Posted by Andy Astbury on January 14, 2010 at 8:26 AM
Nice shot Craig - tight formation with nothing obscured that matters - bet it looks great printed :wavey:
Posted by Guy Rogers on January 14, 2010 at 8:46 AM
Hello Craig.

Lovely image and I like the first one best and I wouldnt crop it.

Yes it puts more impact on the birds but their are to sides to this image that make it so nice to look at. The group of swans are nicely placed and make for a good composition, and the graduated colours in the back ground make for a nice back drop for the birds and make this a more sutle image to look at which is why it is so nice.

The crop does work but for me it take away the nice feel to this image.

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Posted by Robert Lawrence on January 14, 2010 at 8:51 AM
A beautiful image Craig. Both versions have their merits. I personally prefer the first one as it has a bit more subtle atmoshere to it.
Robert
Posted by Chris O'Reilly on January 14, 2010 at 9:37 AM
Hi Craig

I like it. Although I agree with the comments about the crop, congrats on producing a successful flight shot - it isn't easy to bring everything together when shooting subject matter in motion.
The sky's subtle hues contrast really nicely with the bright yellow of the birds' beaks. Well done.

Cheers,
Chris
Posted by Dave Bartlett on January 14, 2010 at 9:46 AM
Well done on getting such great positioning of the birds and how each individual in the flock relates to the others. I'd pick the first one, but both are excellent.
Posted by Andy Gregory on January 14, 2010 at 10:17 AM
Lovely shot Craig. I like everything about the image especially the background colour. I think that I prefer the first one though. :toast:
Posted by David Taylor on January 14, 2010 at 10:56 AM
Second one for me. :wavey: But both are excellent.



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Posted by Jeroen Stel on January 14, 2010 at 11:01 AM
Lovely color scheme and clarity!
Well done getting all of them sharp!

Greetings,

Jeroen Stel
Posted by Major Gilbert on January 14, 2010 at 11:26 AM
Delightful Craig now your motoring.

Major
Posted by Mike Andrews on January 14, 2010 at 11:30 AM
Good colours, good composition, great detail. What else is there to say?

I prefer the first one. :toast:
Posted by Kim Connolly on January 14, 2010 at 1:56 PM
Both are absolutely gorgeous, I think I prefer the second, but does it matter; the birds are beautifully detailed, and subtle changes in the background are superb. Brilliant. :toast: :toast:
Posted by Philip Newman on January 14, 2010 at 2:31 PM
Lovely group indeed and the background is perfect.

Posted by Paul Rosser on January 14, 2010 at 3:04 PM
A nicely exposed image Craig, all birds appear sharp, and I like the tones to this. Good capture! :wavey:
Regards,
Paul.
Posted by Liam Pauling on January 14, 2010 at 3:17 PM
Lovely image Craig, I really like the light.

:toast:
liam.
Posted by Ron McCombe on January 14, 2010 at 3:29 PM
I Craig

I think the second picture is the better one, super image,sharp and serene

well done

Ron
Posted by Rob McEwen on January 14, 2010 at 4:04 PM
Hi Craig,

a lovely image of some wonderful birds. I prefer the first one for the gorgeous sky. I like the rust detail on the second bird from the left.
Well done on getting shots of a group that aren't carrying those stonking yellow leg irons like all the swans I get shots of do ! :biggrin:
Posted by Paul Hobson on January 14, 2010 at 6:20 PM
Hi Craig

lovely sky with great swans, very nice

Paul Hobson
www.paulhobson.co.uk
Posted by Mark Sisson on January 15, 2010 at 4:14 AM
Nice clean classic whooper shot - on the cropping it depends if it's a perfect image or stock image you're after of sourse so both have a role/use for sure.

Mark

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Posted by David Kjaer on January 15, 2010 at 5:09 AM
Hi Craig

Great formation, light, and colours. Maybe a little more space in front of the birds would look good but this is a beautiful image!

David :toast: :toast: :toast:
Posted by Sandra Hendrikse on January 15, 2010 at 8:43 AM
What a great flight shot, Graig. The subtle colours of the sky are really beautiful. I prefer the first image, but the second one works well too. Very well done. :smile: :smile:
Posted by Ian Mason on January 15, 2010 at 4:47 PM
I would settle for either - both are superb! Colours are sublime.
Posted by Craig Jones on January 15, 2010 at 7:01 PM
Thank you all for your kind comments :wink: :wink: :wavey:
Posted by Des Ong on January 16, 2010 at 1:16 PM
Don't mind either Craig, as there are both gorgeous. If I had to choose one, I'd go for the top. Lovely capture.

Des