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Morning on Last Dollar Road

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Posted by Jeff Beard on February 1, 2010 at 9:54 AM
Morning on Last Dollar Road
Hi folks,

The weekend before last I took an impromptu drive to scout out some locations I haven't visited yet. I took this picture one morning and wanted to get some feedback from the experts. It's not one of those killer shots with the sun peeking over the mountains but I thought the light reflecting across the fresh snow was cool. I have a hard time teasing out those subtleties without making other parts of an image a bit wonky.

Thanks for looking!

--Jeff
Posted by Stan Rose on February 1, 2010 at 11:03 AM
Sweet! Great job on the exposure, Jeff.
Posted by John Mumaw on February 1, 2010 at 11:52 AM
I'm no expert, but I sure can appreciate a fine sunrise like this one.
I do wish that the foliage didn't block so much of that fenceline, and even though the image may not be technically tilted, it still has the appearance of a counterclockwise tilt that's a bit offputting.
Posted by Todd Caudle on February 1, 2010 at 12:07 PM
I agree with John on the perception of this being tilted. Even if it's not, perception is reality, and I would consider rotating it CW to see if that solves it. Having said that, it's a magnificent shot, and I love how you have not overdone the foreground. There's enough detail to get your point across.
Posted by Lynn Scott on February 1, 2010 at 12:36 PM
Jeff

Great shot! I prob would not have noticed what John and Todd mentioned. Then again thats why im on the sight to learn.

I love the comp and exposure. Very well done.
Posted by Bill Pelzmann on February 1, 2010 at 12:46 PM
Sweet morning, Jeff. I think the forground exposure is just fine. You certainly don't want it much brighter.
Posted by Koveh Tavakkol on February 1, 2010 at 12:59 PM
Great image, but I agree with comments above. I would crop/tilt this so your horizon is flat.
Posted by Brian Jackson on February 1, 2010 at 1:01 PM
Great sky. I'd agree with the above comments as well.
Posted by Joshua Hardin on February 1, 2010 at 4:29 PM
Cool. I like the unconventional comp from this location. The tilt issue John and Todd point out also occurred to me, but I think you might have cropped it this way to center the bushes and fence line in the lower foreground, and, respectfully disagreeing with the above, I think it really works as-is. Re-tilting it in favor of the higher horizon would put more attention on the mountains, but I think the current emphasis on the foreground would suffer as a result.

Nice job of controlling the exposure, the lower clouds almost blew out but you've got them under control.
Posted by Don George on February 1, 2010 at 5:02 PM
Great colors in this image. The foreground brush kinda overcomes the image but I've been there before and understand it.
Posted by Paul Wegemann on February 1, 2010 at 6:19 PM
I like it just the way it is. This is a beautiful image, Jeff. My only nit is the blown out yellows, but that's to be expected shooting right into the sunrise.
Posted by Morris McClung on February 1, 2010 at 6:26 PM
Nice light and color, and the others have made the important points for improvements.
Posted by Jeff Beard on February 1, 2010 at 7:33 PM
Folks, thanks for all the great feedback.

Oddly enough, I wasn't put off by the descending slope and I'm actually pretty picky about a straight horizons and odd angles like that. For me this image was all about the light cascading across the snow.

Regardless, I followed the advice to rotate and crop but the comp really fell apart for me; it made those already-too-large bushes bigger (they looked cool because of layer of frost but that didn't come through).

I also noticed the colors are more saturated here than they are in PS too.

Anyway, I guess I'll just have to go back down after the next storm. Oh darn. :wink:

Thanks again for the thoughtful feedback.

--Jeff
Posted by Dan Walters on February 1, 2010 at 11:42 PM
Great color in the sky. I also like the sagebrush in the foreground.
Posted by Jesse Speer on February 3, 2010 at 12:20 PM
I love this as is. Great moment/light, nice lines, the subtle glow on the land. Excellent work all around. I don't perceive any tilt, I actually like the diagonals. In this comp, the bushes provide a nice anchor - to keep your eye from being swept off the left edge by the fence line.
Posted by D J Kuklinski on February 3, 2010 at 1:54 PM
Excellent capture! I see nothing wrong with this image whatsoever. :toast: