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Grass Widow

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Posted by Christopher Mitche on March 6, 2010 at 6:08 PM
I took this about three hours ago.
Posted by wade pettitt on March 6, 2010 at 6:51 PM
Nice job Christopher, hope the update was helpful.
Posted by Amy Lindsey on March 6, 2010 at 9:09 PM
It's nice to see spring colors popping up, but there are several things in this image that are distracting. The tree in the background totally takes away from your flowers. I would prefer a shot more from the left with the sky as the background. I would also consider getting rid of the small stems on the bottom center/right. Maybe even get a little closer to your main subject to draw the viewer in a little more.
Posted by David Bostock on March 7, 2010 at 1:42 PM
Christopher, I think Amy's got some good suggestions. If this were shot without the tree in the background, then the blue sky would have created a nice negative space for the flowers. I really like the low angle, looking back up at the flowers. It adds a majesty to the image.