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My berries

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Posted by simon manning on March 8, 2010 at 2:13 AM
My berries
not very seasonal despite how cold it is ,i had about 30 redwings in my holly tree which they stripped bare in days !

20d
90-300@250mm
1/100@f8
iso 200
Posted by Rene de Heer on March 8, 2010 at 3:00 AM
Indeed a very nice seasonal image, a slight headturn might improve the image.
Rene de Heer
Posted by Nigel Blake on March 8, 2010 at 4:18 AM
Very nice framing and I agree about the head turn; however I think the foreground foliage, sadly, looks sharper than the bird in this shot, a shame as it has the makings of being a great image.
Posted by John Robinson on March 8, 2010 at 5:28 AM
Nits covered. Good seasonal job though.
JohnR
Posted by Ian Macdermott on March 8, 2010 at 9:02 AM
Hi Simon,

Nice try but its not sharp where it counts sadly :smile:
Posted by Karen Summers on March 8, 2010 at 11:57 AM
shame about the sharpness but I love the habitat its in
Posted by David Kjaer on March 8, 2010 at 12:30 PM
Lovely setting!

David :toast:
Posted by simon manning on March 8, 2010 at 3:21 PM
thanks for all the comments :toast:
Posted by Justin on March 8, 2010 at 4:13 PM
Such a shame the bird isn't that bit sharper as the setting is superb.
Posted by Mark Green on March 9, 2010 at 7:51 AM
great image, would make a nice christmas card, agree with the above comments on sharpness.

Cheers
Mark.G
Posted by David Sewell on March 9, 2010 at 11:13 AM
Simon, I don't think you can entirely overcome the sharpness problem, but you can improve things a little if you take the following steps:

1. Selectively sharpen the bird only in Photoshop.
2. Make a duplicate layer and treat this to a very mild blurring using gaussian blur.
3. Use the eraser tool to rub away the blurry area over the bird only
4. Merge visible and save.

As I say, it won't be perfect, but hopefully it will be an improvement.

David
Posted by simon manning on March 10, 2010 at 7:45 AM
i'll give that a go david ,still learning all this stuff theres alot to learn too !.

Simon