Posted by Cliff Dodge on March 14, 2010 at 7:27 PM
Walking bottle beach with the tide out. I was looking for stuff like this. The weather didnt co-operate for much else light wise. As always thanks for the critiques and suggestions, good or bad.
Posted by Ned Fenimore on March 15, 2010 at 1:26 AM
I checked this out a few times this evening.. I think I'd like it better with the shell a little less centered. good study of the diagonal lines against the lines of the shell ridges..
I like the shell, the lines, the lightness and color of the shell against the dark sand. I agree it might be a too centered, but it isn't too big of a deal to me.
It's okay, Cliff. Nice symmetry in the comp; I'm on the fence about centered or not. Nice contrast of the opposing diagonal lines and the color of the shell against the sand.
I would have gone at a little more of an angle in order to de-center the shell and create a larger sense of scale (small shell big beach). Nice diagonals by the way. The color is effective as well.
Posted by Cliff Dodge on March 16, 2010 at 6:01 PM
Better? Or wrong side?
Posted by David Bostock on March 16, 2010 at 8:31 PM
Better. It offers a nice off-center anchor to the wavy lines of sand. I like it.
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