I'm sorry Jeff but this shot does nothing at all for me. The background is too fussy and distracting, there is little to no eye contact. Compositionally I would crop some of the ponies back, say up to the shoulder line, more space below the nose and a little bit off the right.
Posted by Cliff Young on March 17, 2010 at 4:46 AM
Jeff, have you tried a portrait crop to make the subject stand out more?
Posted by Andy Shepherd on March 17, 2010 at 6:02 AM
It's a very nice portrait Jeff, slight nits covered. Keep em coming
Re the comp comments, as I'm guessing these are not particulary flighty subjects, so rather than fiddle with crops etc., I'd try moving around the subject yourself to try to achieve more pleasing BG's if you can, and light permitting ? I took some images of the Exmoor Ponies last year - hardy fellows aren't they !
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6 repliescanon 1d3
focal length 99mm
1/250, f9.0, iso 250
jeff acreman
Paul.
lovely portrait
Might have been improved by shooting at f5.6 to blur the background a bit more and make the subject stand out a bit better
It's a very nice portrait Jeff, slight nits covered. Keep em coming
Andy...