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Lupine, Arvin, California

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Posted by Robert Dayton on June 4, 2010 at 10:59 PM
Lupine, Arvin, California
The wildflower season in Southern
California was very special this
year. The area near the small
community of Arvin was certainly
no exception. In this image I used
a rather shallow DOF (probably F11
or F13) to emphaize the Lupine in the FG.
I'm a little concerned about the possibility
that I've oversharpened with reference to the
background wildflowers. Comments/critiques
welcome.

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Posted by Roland Burkert on June 4, 2010 at 11:29 PM
This is a very nice scene, but yes, it looks oversharpened. The BG does not work as is.
Posted by Michael R Reynolds on June 4, 2010 at 11:35 PM
Robert,
Very nice bloom, with great colors. The lack of DF is distracting, so maybe crop to feature the FG lupines. bBest Regards.
Posted by Harley Goldman on June 5, 2010 at 9:06 AM
I would say it look a bit oversharpend. I also find the DOF of field to be an in-betweener. I would either like it sharp back to front or see the background really out of focus so it is a strong selective focus effect. With this one, I would prefer to see it cropped to a horizontal presentation and have the sharpening backed off. You found yourself a fine field of color, though. Nice spot!
Posted by Paul Breitkreuz on June 5, 2010 at 2:03 PM
Robert, what a great find. I do find the DOF a bit of a different feel, but the scene has some really great colors overall.
Posted by Robert Dayton on June 5, 2010 at 3:30 PM
In light of some very helpful critiques, I've lessened the sharpening
on the image and reposted here. I also changed the tonality a
little, warming the image somewhat. I can't do anything regarding
the DOF. Unfortunately, I failed to adequately bracket. I would
appreciate your feedback. Thank you for viewing.