There is some real potential in this image Graham and I like it, but I think it looks a little bit 'washed-out' on my monitor. Might consider adjusting the levels slightly to offer a little more detail in the lighter areas on the face and offer a little more saturation to make it punch. Might even stand a touch more USM at this sized image.
For me a good portrait slightly spoiled by the eye. I'm assuming that the white is the edge of the third eyelid. All the puffins I have seen have usually had darker eyes than on this bird and it just seems a little odd to me.
Love the expression in the look, very 'doleful'... agree a few tweaks in the processing will make this an even stronger image... I have no idea if it would have been possible, but a slightly lower viewpoint?
Thanks for the feedback as always. It was a bright morning with sun behind me and I couldn't get lower unfortunately. Agree that I could do more with the blacks, but I didn't want to overcook it. Chrs, Graham
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10 repliesCamera Model Canon EOS-1D Mark III
Shooting Mode Aperture-Priority AE
Tv( Shutter Speed ) 1/1000
Av( Aperture Value ) 6.3
Metering Mode Evaluative Metering
Exposure Compensation -1/3
ISO Speed 400
Lens EF500mm f/4L IS USM
Focal Length 500.0mm
Tim
Kind regards,
Brett
Don't you just know how he's feeling it's been one of those days. The eye holds the key.
Colour is fine on my PC, a cracker.
well done
well done
well done
Calum