It's a nice shot but I'm sorry to say that for me the OOF red splodge behind and to the right detracts from the subject too much.
Posted by David Sewell on June 14, 2010 at 10:51 AM
I am going to take a different stance. I think the oof red splodge helps to balance the picture. the only thing I don't like about it is that I would prefer to see it a tad higher in the frame.
I like it Phil and I think it needs the other oof poppies as to me I rarely associate poppies with individual plants and so would expect to see evidence of others to put it in context. I would have liked to see a little more of the stem though.
I was trying something like this myself over the weekend and I think you captured it very well here. It works for me, albeit a little short on the stem.
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6 repliesCanon 1D Mk11N,500 Canon lens,1/1600 f4 and iso 250.
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david
Brett
I like the OOF poppy on the right but would reduce the saturation of that area of the background.
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Austin