Rework of Who are you looking at

Hi all, have reworked this image from a different shot, tink I orefer this version what do you think.
Tec specs same as before
Thanks

I love the idea of this image but not quite sure if the eyes are sharp enough which need to be for this to work, but see what others think might just be me

As Karen mentions, the eye's need to be much sharper that this for the image to work. The image also has some very distinct banding running through the BG and what looks like vertical lines from the clone tool, correct these and you have a winner.

Andy...

Nits covered. I agree the whole essence of the shot(which is a good idea) needs to be really sharp.
Cheers
JohnR