This is the result of further experiments around the idea of 'wideangle macro', something that I find very appealing. This is a Brown Hawker dragonfly taken very early in the morning with a fisheye lens. A difficult technique to get right (not least because the lens has to be only 3-4 inches from the dragonfly).
A great technique! I really like this image. Perhaps try and get a bit more detail out of the Brown Hawker as it appears a little dark on my monitor.
The one thing I find a little distracting is the suns relection in the water. Maybe a little toning down would help, my eye just keeps getting drawn to it.
Shaun
Posted by Andy Astbury on June 25, 2010 at 3:49 AM
I like this Matt - works well.
I'd agree with Shaun about the sun - perhaps a second shot 8 stops under gently blended on the right side in a separate layer in PS would tone things down a tad, but the shot concept works very well - nice one Matt
many thanks Shaun and Andy. I agree about the sun's reflection and tried several ways to reduce the glare but on each occasion it just didn't look quite right. I'll try your suggestion Andy.
Shaun, I was in 2 minds about whether to get more detail in the dragon or not. I have other versions where I used a reflector but the lights looks a bit artificial given the position of the sun. In the end I went for more of a silhouette on this version but I'd be interested to know if others would like to see more detail on the dragonfly.
I really like this shot, Matt. Works very well. Agree about the reflection of the sun, but Andy has given you a good suggestion to improve that. The Brown Hawker looks fine on my screen.
I like it very much Matt.Sun's reflection covered,the hawker looks fine to me as you can see that it is brown with a little detail and so not just a silhouette.Maybe just a little separation between the wings and the trees/reflection on the left hand side?
Yes all been said. I find the level of the hedge in the background a little awkward as it crosses the line of the main subject. I love wide angle insect stuff.
JohnR
I've given this image a little bit more thought as I like it so much.
One way of toning down the sun highlight would be to use a 50% Gray Gradient layer and use a medium brush setting the opacity low to say 5-8% and brush out to reveal the gray grad where you want it.
I do prefer the second photo, looks just that bit more natural, a few subtle adjustments has made all the difference, the only thing that slightly detracts from the image for me is the lake foreground, I find my attention drawn to the bottom right of the image. Otherwise, I really like the technique you have used, hope you post some more like this.
Discussion
17 repliesHere's a 1100 pixel version.
Canon 7D with Tokina 10-17mm fisheye lens at 17mm, f11, 1/640, ISO 400, liveview, tripod.
I would be very grateful for comments and critique on this image.
Matt
A great technique! I really like this image. Perhaps try and get a bit more detail out of the Brown Hawker as it appears a little dark on my monitor.
The one thing I find a little distracting is the suns relection in the water. Maybe a little toning down would help, my eye just keeps getting drawn to it.
Shaun
I'd agree with Shaun about the sun - perhaps a second shot 8 stops under gently blended on the right side in a separate layer in PS would tone things down a tad, but the shot concept works very well - nice one Matt
Shaun, I was in 2 minds about whether to get more detail in the dragon or not. I have other versions where I used a reflector but the lights looks a bit artificial given the position of the sun. In the end I went for more of a silhouette on this version but I'd be interested to know if others would like to see more detail on the dragonfly.
Matt
Simon
Very nice as posted - some good suggestions which might improve it a little. I like it!
David
Phil.
JohnR
Nits covered already so wont go over them again.
I shot some Southern Hawkers in flight last year with an 18mm lens, they were just so nosey that they were coming to with in 4 to 5 feet of me.
I've given this image a little bit more thought as I like it so much.
One way of toning down the sun highlight would be to use a 50% Gray Gradient layer and use a medium brush setting the opacity low to say 5-8% and brush out to reveal the gray grad where you want it.
I hope this helps.
Shaun
Dave
Here's a 1100 pixel version.
I do prefer the second photo, looks just that bit more natural, a few subtle adjustments has made all the difference, the only thing that slightly detracts from the image for me is the lake foreground, I find my attention drawn to the bottom right of the image. Otherwise, I really like the technique you have used, hope you post some more like this.
Heath