Robert, this is extremely nice. I think your overall time of day capture hits this site perfectly. The scene provides some nice contrast between the highlights and shadows. Not a big fan of cropping myself in many cases, however, I do find maybe just a slight bottom crop here might work out nicely. Possibly just up to the very bottoms of the first lupine group on the left.
I like the composition of this, but do agree with Paul's suggestion for the crop. Also, you might try to take a little of the blue and cyan out of the snow in the shade and lighten the sky just a bit. I love all the flowers and they they be accentauted, in my opinion. You did a good job in some tough light.
--P
Posted by Robert Dayton on August 22, 2010 at 3:00 PM
Thank you, Paul and Preston, for the constructive criticism.
I've made changes in a repost shown here based upon your
suggestions. If you have time, let me know what you think.
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7 repliestwo weeks ago. I appreciate your critiques.
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I like the composition of this, but do agree with Paul's suggestion for the crop. Also, you might try to take a little of the blue and cyan out of the snow in the shade and lighten the sky just a bit. I love all the flowers and they they be accentauted, in my opinion. You did a good job in some tough light.
--P
I've made changes in a repost shown here based upon your
suggestions. If you have time, let me know what you think.
-Murali
--P