Thanks for your suggestions and critique in the previous thread here.
I did a little bit of rework on the first two images and tried to make the foreground a little better, does this look about right ?
Thanks a lot for looking again and your valuable comments.
And a shot from the onset of storm in North yellowstone.
Posted by John Mumaw on September 15, 2010 at 6:58 PM
Those are much improved, Soubhik.
A wee bit dark, but that actually adds to the ominous look.
The last one is new and just fine. I like the inclusion of the angled slope of dry grass in the foreground, and the prominent dead trees help give this an almost haunted look. Well done!
Posted by Koveh Tavakkol on September 15, 2010 at 8:31 PM
The foreground in #2 is really nice. I would agree with John, if you can lighten the middle of the image to bring out a little more of the hills that would make it even better.
Posted by Stan Rose on September 16, 2010 at 2:34 AM
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11 repliesI did a little bit of rework on the first two images and tried to make the foreground a little better, does this look about right ?
Thanks a lot for looking again and your valuable comments.
A wee bit dark, but that actually adds to the ominous look.
The last one is new and just fine. I like the inclusion of the angled slope of dry grass in the foreground, and the prominent dead trees help give this an almost haunted look. Well done!