While in Wyoming for my aerial missions last month, I spent a chilly night in the Upper Green and made this image of Squaretop Mtn. above the fog. It's hard to make an image in that area without beetle kill, so the fog was a gift.
Feedback would be cool.
Posted by Joshua Hardin on September 16, 2010 at 4:56 PM
Stunning. I really like how the light is shining on the mountain just above the moody fog bank. Wonderfully done Dave!
Posted by Paul Martin on September 16, 2010 at 6:05 PM
Love the soft light and fog, nice image!
Posted by Koveh Tavakkol on September 16, 2010 at 6:09 PM
Beautiful image Dave. That fog really makes the scene. I would even consider cropping in a little tighter to show less sky and more of that interesting fog with trees jutting through.
Posted by Doug Koepsel on September 16, 2010 at 7:37 PM
Dave, the fog in the trees area great addition to the shot. It feels a little cut off on the bottom as I would like the see just a little more foreground. I agree with Kovah about maybe cropping 1/4 of the sky above Squaretop.
Man, that thing looks big over the fog! I agree with the crop suggestion too. Still, the mountain sticking up out of the fog into the blue sky really gives it an above-the-clouds feel.
Posted by John Mumaw on September 16, 2010 at 7:57 PM
This is strikingly beautiful, Dave. That mountain is unique and imposing, and I love it. I think the crop suggestion is a good idea and the foreground looks just fine to me.
I noticed there's a strong blue cast in the image, but it actually works well here except in one place...on the mountain.
Here's what I would do to optimize it:
Make a Levels (or Curves) adjustment layer.
Choose the grey eyedropper and click it on one of the trees in the front.
Really makes that sunlit area pop, eh? The rest of the image loses the coolness with the correction, though.
To fix that, create a layer mask and paint away every place you don't want the color cast (the mountain).
That's my feedback anyway. Whatever you choose to do, this is a fine (and unique!) image. Well done!
Posted by Morris McClung on September 16, 2010 at 8:57 PM
Great mood with the fog and then that imposing mountain rising out of it. Outstanding shot!
Posted by Don Grall on September 16, 2010 at 11:31 PM
Great shot, Dave. One of these days I will have to visit that area. I've driven by many times but always focused on Yellowstone/Tetons, or else heading home.
Posted by Jeff Beard on September 17, 2010 at 12:25 AM
A seriously sweet image.
Posted by Stan Rose on September 17, 2010 at 2:36 AM
Totally cool, Dave!
ive often wondered if its possible to get up there in winter, would probably be pretty neat.
Posted by Paul Wegemann on September 17, 2010 at 7:49 AM
Thanks for the feedback everyone. About the comp: I've cropped it (before posting) square and 4:5 and decided that I like the ridge leading to the mountain. I can't see any reason for more FG and I was composing to avoid a fence on the LH side. Personally, any more FG would distract from the subject.
I often struggle with getting more pop! from images and this one is no exception. Thanks to Cloudman for the great tutorial and John, your suggestion worked really well. Here's the image after John's grey eyedropper idea:
Posted by John Mumaw on September 17, 2010 at 11:13 AM
Bingo! Love it, Dave.
Posted by Kurt Bowman on September 17, 2010 at 1:11 PM
great shot Dave! Love the fog and the light on the mountain!
Discussion
15 repliesFeedback would be cool.
I noticed there's a strong blue cast in the image, but it actually works well here except in one place...on the mountain.
Here's what I would do to optimize it:
Make a Levels (or Curves) adjustment layer.
Choose the grey eyedropper and click it on one of the trees in the front.
Really makes that sunlit area pop, eh? The rest of the image loses the coolness with the correction, though.
To fix that, create a layer mask and paint away every place you don't want the color cast (the mountain).
That's my feedback anyway. Whatever you choose to do, this is a fine (and unique!) image. Well done!
ive often wondered if its possible to get up there in winter, would probably be pretty neat.
I often struggle with getting more pop! from images and this one is no exception. Thanks to Cloudman for the great tutorial and John, your suggestion worked really well. Here's the image after John's grey eyedropper idea: