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Juvenile Kittiwake

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Posted by jack chapman on September 26, 2010 at 8:37 AM
Juvenile Kittiwake
from a well known spot on the east coast of scotland

40D + 300mm F4L + 1.4 extender
full frame
Posted by Geoffrey Baker on September 26, 2010 at 10:28 AM
This is beautiful, it looks great against that dark background :smile:
I'd clone out that piece of grass? bottom right though, it does nothing for the photo.
A great shot, well done.

Geoff.
Posted by John Robinson on September 26, 2010 at 11:16 AM
Great lighting on this, Just a pity the beak slightly lost in the background but could be my monitor. Good stuff.
JR
Posted by Maggie Campbell on September 26, 2010 at 11:22 AM
I agree with Geoff's and John's comments re minor nits but still a lovely image. The lighting coming through the wings is beautiful. :jump:
Posted by Andy Gregory on September 26, 2010 at 12:23 PM
A great image well captured. I like it a lot. :toast: :jump:
Posted by Graham Goddard on September 26, 2010 at 12:52 PM
Agree re the grass, and beak - otherwise a striking use of the light :toast:
Posted by Karen Summers on September 26, 2010 at 2:02 PM
A beautiful capture would look much better with the grass cloned out, I can just make out the beak
Posted by Mark Davies on September 26, 2010 at 3:36 PM
An image with so much potential and definitely worth a revisit .
Posted by eric weight on September 26, 2010 at 3:37 PM
That's a lovely shot Jack. If you just carefully use the dodge tool on the brighter pixels around the top edge of the beak, it would help it stand out a bit better from the background. a couple of taps on the catchlight while you are at it would lift it even more. My kind of image that.
:toast:
Posted by Ian Haskell on September 26, 2010 at 6:15 PM
Agree with the feedback above. Certainly worth a revisit.

Ian
Posted by Sandra Hendrikse on September 27, 2010 at 2:19 AM
I agree about the grass and the beak but otherwise a beautiful image, with great lighting. :smile:
Posted by Chris Lloyd on September 27, 2010 at 7:33 AM
Cracking image Jack, nits covered but a cracker all the same. :toast:

Chris.
Posted by Guy Rogers on September 27, 2010 at 11:46 AM
Hello Jack.

Very nice and a great job on the exposure keeping all the white together.

:wavey: :wavey: :wavey:
Posted by Andrew Parkinson on September 28, 2010 at 4:25 AM
Hi Jack

Cracking shot, good behaviour and beautifully lit. It's also well framed with the kittiwake flying into the space in the frame, one of your best

Andy