Posted by Larry Fischer on October 28, 2010 at 12:39 PM
Taken last Sunday in the Flint Hills of Kansas.
The leaves were falling with the brisk wind that blew.
Nikon D700, Nikkor 14-24.
Posted by Randy Wilson on October 28, 2010 at 1:04 PM
I usually don't like creek scenes taken in bright sunlight, but this turned out pretty well. What I like most is the bottom center of the image, with the sunlit leaf and the pattern of blue and white sky reflections leading off to upper right. If the right side had been more in the shade, it would have fit in with the character of the rest of the image better.
Posted by Larry Fischer on October 28, 2010 at 4:38 PM
Randy,
You make a good point about the right side.
I'll do some processing and see if darkening that area gives more balance.
Thanks for the constructive critique.
the fisch
Posted by Larry Fischer on October 28, 2010 at 6:32 PM
Randy,
I've made some changes on the right side.
Comments appreciated.
the fisch
Posted by Karla Hall on October 28, 2010 at 7:38 PM
I think I would compromise between the two...The darker one doesn't look natural. Neat bunch of textures though...Interesting shot.
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6 repliesThe leaves were falling with the brisk wind that blew.
Nikon D700, Nikkor 14-24.
You make a good point about the right side.
I'll do some processing and see if darkening that area gives more balance.
Thanks for the constructive critique.
the fisch
I've made some changes on the right side.
Comments appreciated.
the fisch