Posted by Pam Colander on July 24, 2011 at 6:19 PM
The last couple of times I've gone to the Sand Dunes, I have eye-balled this tree. Yesterday we were in the area so we hung around 'til sunset to shoot this guy. This is a three image blend put together in the latest version of Photomatix. I would really appreciate a good critique of this since I'd like to make a plaque of it.
I love how the tree 'reaches' out toward the sunstar, and I especially like the muted HDR treatment. This is how all HDR images should look, IMO. Excellent composition, too. You might consider cloning out the tiny stray branches at the top.
I find the blown out area of the sun to be pretty distracting, though. Almost wish you had included a much more underexposed shot to compensate for it.
Superb use of HDR tecniques. I do think the tree would look more natural though if it were a bit darker and contrastier.
Posted by Pam Colander on July 25, 2011 at 12:54 PM
Thanks SO much for the excellent feedback everyone! I have made some adjustments based on your suggestions and have thrown it in the Landscape gallery for further evaluation. You can also see a larger version of it there
I commented on the Landscape gallery, but still wanted to say again how much Iike the comp and processing.
Posted by Pam Colander on July 27, 2011 at 1:29 AM
Aw, thanks for the double comment Morris. This repost is utilizing the suggestions made. It certainly knocked the sunstar down several notches! Thanks for your valuable help, I've learned a lot with this!
Posted by Howard Cihak on July 27, 2011 at 7:24 AM
Pam, your re-do looks gorgeous. You've captured an outstanding composition.
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I find the blown out area of the sun to be pretty distracting, though. Almost wish you had included a much more underexposed shot to compensate for it.