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A few more for feedback on

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Posted by Lance Burch on July 28, 2011 at 9:34 AM
A few more for feedback on
I am looking to try and improve so please anything you see as far as comp or processing is welcome.

Posted by Lance Burch on July 28, 2011 at 9:35 AM
#2 This was before the sky turned cool in my earlier posting.
Posted by Lance Burch on July 28, 2011 at 9:36 AM
#3 This was the next morning, I know the sky was uninteresting.

Posted by Koveh Tavakkol on July 28, 2011 at 12:53 PM
#1 is my favorite here Lance..both processing and comp look great. I just love these spring/summer views of the Aspens with lush greens and flowers. I wish there was a bit more wildflowers in the bottom to fill in, but it is still very beautiful.
Posted by Morris McClung on July 28, 2011 at 6:27 PM
#1 works really well as a semi-pano comp, nice light in #2, and the flowers are gorgeous in #3. Maybe bring up the brightness in the shadow areas of all 3, but it could just be my lousy monitor.
Posted by John Mumaw on July 28, 2011 at 6:52 PM
I like #1 quite a bit. Composition and 'development' look right on.
Love the light you got on the mountains in #2. My only suggestion there would be to tweak out a bit more detail in the shadowed area in the right quarter.
The flowers in #3 more than make up for a bald blue sky, IMO. My only suggestion there would be to clone out the bright stem in the foreground about an inch from the right.
All in all, a very fine set from your trip!
Posted by Lance Burch on July 29, 2011 at 8:50 AM
Thanks Koveh, Morris, & John. Appreciate the feedback. I'll see what I can do about the shadow area and the stem.
Posted by Soubhik Patranabis on July 29, 2011 at 10:40 AM
#1 and #3 are very nice.
Foreground columbines in #3 look a little soft to me but may be in a larger version they will look absolutely fine.
Beautiful set.
Posted by David Bartlett _CO on July 29, 2011 at 1:09 PM
Beautiful images...Thanks for sharing.
Posted by Stan Rose on July 29, 2011 at 9:09 PM
I love #1!
#3 is nice too, needs a little tweak to the fg brightness tho. :smile:
Posted by Kurt Bowman on July 30, 2011 at 10:03 PM
I like the whole set Lance! Good stuff!!