Nice one Guy. I understand where Pete is coming from (though I think he meant the space on the left?) but with these shots the water splash behind the bird is a major part of the image. If you keep the splash and the extra space for the bird to fly into the bird ends up looking a bit lost...... lose the splash, have extra space in front and you lose some of the movement !
Personally I think you have chosen the right option.
Posted by Matt Cole on November 22, 2011 at 1:45 AM
Very nice Guy. Shame it was moving slightly away from yoru but the reflection and the water splash really add to the image.
Matt
Posted by David Sewell on November 22, 2011 at 9:03 AM
You have done well retaining all the detail in the whites. I agree that the splash is important, and think I agree with Pete that it is on the right that you want a bit more space, even if the bird is then flying out of the picture.
David
Posted by Nick Mckeown on November 22, 2011 at 1:05 PM
Hi Guy. Beautiful image and well done with the whites I also tend to agree with the little extra space on the right as the water droplets are right on the edge of the picture but that is just being picky I need more practise with flight shots as I usually end up with half a bird!
Nick
Posted by Oscar Dewhurst on November 22, 2011 at 4:53 PM
Great shot Guy. I think composition for these is tricky. I think you have it pretty well, but might add a bit more to the right
Oscar
Posted by Ian Mason on November 24, 2011 at 4:01 PM
I think this is superb! I would be inclined to crop a lot from the LEFT and add some to the RIGHT, emphasising the fact the bird is moving away - breaks all the rules, but I think it would work. The splash is great!
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Personally I think you have chosen the right option.
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