Exactly what Jack said. This would have been an ideal image for a double exposure blend, but you still may be able to double process the RAW file to get just a bit more detail in the fore and midground..
I dunno, to me the sky and larger landscape feel kind of dark and low contrast compared to the foreground under the overhang. The shadowed walls of the kiva could maybe use a little more detail, but the oustside, especially to the left feels somehow heavy and hazy to me. But there's no question that it's a sweet shot with an amazing sky!
Posted by Richard Olsen on March 23, 2012 at 1:04 PM
Ok....now that I have the sleepys out of my eyes and my feeble brain recharged with a little sleep I went back to work this morning on the dark kiva area. Thanks for the replies and suggestions! This photo is actually a 3 exposure blend. sky, butte area, and kiva
Any suggestions on the re-work will be appreciated!
Posted by Kurt Bowman on March 23, 2012 at 1:12 PM
richard, the colors are spectacular and love the comp on this one! I like the re-post much better , but I do still find myself wishing it was just a bit brighter still.
Posted by Jack Garrett on March 23, 2012 at 2:56 PM
I'd say you are 90% there with the re-post....looks much better. I still think just a little lighter in the kiva itself and lower valley area below candlestick. The final is gonna be a show stopper!!
Moving in the right direction, Richard. In addition to bumping up overall brightness, a little more contrast would also be beneficial.
Posted by Richard Olsen on March 23, 2012 at 11:29 PM
Ok....3rd try to go along with the 3rd trip
I appreciate the feedback on this. I've been hesitant to brighten the image too much and have it lighter than the sky.
As before, suggestions appreciated!
Posted by Kurt Bowman on March 23, 2012 at 11:36 PM
BINGO!!!! WoW, that was worth the re-works This did it for me Richard. I personally love it!
Posted by John Mumaw on March 24, 2012 at 10:03 AM
The midground looks perfect now, but it seems to me that the alcove/right hillside area is a bit too bright. I prefer the luminosity of the second repost in the alcove/hillside, but I think you've nailed everything else. This is really quite a spectacular image and well worth the time and effort you're putting into 'developing' it properly.
Posted by Bob Maynard on March 24, 2012 at 10:10 AM
Personally, I don't like the HDR effect of the heavily over-saturated land part of the image.
Posted by Jack Garrett on March 24, 2012 at 10:48 AM
Not trying to make sales for Chips tutorial but if you know your way somewhat around photoshop, his techniques along with Tony Kuypers luminosity masks might help you a lot because you can isolate small parts of the image for those "special" bumps to make this thing sing! You've come a long way in this one so far and you are very close to where you need to be. John M. is an expert at this stuff so I will defer to him!
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Any suggestions on the re-work will be appreciated!
I appreciate the feedback on this. I've been hesitant to brighten the image too much and have it lighter than the sky.
As before, suggestions appreciated!