Posted by David Sewell on March 23, 2012 at 8:44 AM
Those who disagreed with me about eye-level shots in my last upload were right, as I hope this upload demonstrates. Another comment I got was that the eye needed lightening. The same is true in this shot, but in both I have pushed it as far as I can. It is possible to shoot at this site to get the light right on the eye, but I will save that for my next posting.
Despite what I have said about the eye in this shot, it is the eye contact that made me decide to post this one. Probably most apparent in the larger version.
Thanks for looking, and for all the comments on my last post.
the eye looks fine on this one to me David as there is a clear catch light which gives it some life. This is very nice, I like the pose, it's nice and sharp and the blue sky is the final touch.
Matt
Posted by Neil Burton on March 23, 2012 at 9:15 AM
Well seen, but especially captured, based on the species David. Certainly the bigger version does your camera skills justice, very well executed.
Might suggest looking at an alternative crop as it's a little too central I feel, so may be less above and to the right, allowing the bird room to fly into the LH space? Just my 2 cents.
TFS
Steve
Posted by David Sewell on March 23, 2012 at 9:44 AM
Thanks, Steve. An interesting point of view. I chose to crop with the eyes central as I thought it suited the way the bird is staring at me. However, I have tried Steve's suggestion and also gone in a little closer, and quite like it. Which crop do others prefer?
The second for me David. Another excellent in flight shot.
Posted by Mike Smith on March 23, 2012 at 10:04 AM
Central crop for me as per the original post and thinking - the strong eye contact results in no need for the empty space to left for bird to fly into.
Posted by John Robinson on March 23, 2012 at 11:04 AM
I think Iagree. Maybe somewhere between the two. Cracking shot whatever . Especially the biggie !
JR
Posted by Dave Bartlett on March 23, 2012 at 12:57 PM
I would go for the second one, but both are very good. Great eye!
Discussion
17 repliesDespite what I have said about the eye in this shot, it is the eye contact that made me decide to post this one. Probably most apparent in the larger version.
Thanks for looking, and for all the comments on my last post.
David
Nikon D300, 600mm Nikon, 200 ISO, 1/1600th @ f8
Matt
Might suggest looking at an alternative crop as it's a little too central I feel, so may be less above and to the right, allowing the bird room to fly into the LH space? Just my 2 cents.
TFS
Steve
David
JR
Dave
Matt
Excellent capture and I also like the second one better.
Nick.
First one for me, David. The strong diagonal works well with the central comp. Nicely done.
Andy...
Bob
A cracking shot the second has the edge fro me.
Rene de Heer