As promised a picture of a Robin with less perch.
Don't know if it is the same bird as in my last post. But it's possible.
BG little darker then the first post of the Robin.
Exif: 500mm, 1/80sec, F5.6, ISO 640, EV -2/3
C&C Welcome en thanks for looking.
Posted by John Robinson on November 8, 2012 at 5:42 PM
Hi Tom
Classic Robin pic. Can I make some suggestions ?
Crop a little tighter .Take quite a bit off the top, Try to get the bird looking into the pic from the bottom left.
Just my personal opinion.
Cheers
JR
Posted by Neil Burton on November 9, 2012 at 7:59 AM
Agree with John that there is too much top but I loke space so would simply ask for more perch :)
Posted by David Sewell on November 10, 2012 at 5:34 AM
Good shot, but I have to agree with John about the composition.
David
Posted by Bob Johnson on November 10, 2012 at 12:12 PM
Nice robin Tom but it does need a more conventional crop i feel. Perhaps take out the white bob on the perch and try flipping the image so that the bird is look left to right
Bob
Posted by Oscar Dewhurst on November 11, 2012 at 1:35 PM
Lovely bg Tom, but yes I agree about the composition.
Oscar
Posted by Nick Mckeown on November 11, 2012 at 2:24 PM
Nice image Tom but I also agree re the comp. Great light & BG.
Nick.
Posted by keith mitchell on November 11, 2012 at 3:11 PM
Tom i would like to see your "Roodborstje" a little larger in the frame,the pose and the bird looks fine to me.
Keith.
Posted by Tom Smit on November 11, 2012 at 3:55 PM
Thanks again for all the advice. Hope I understood all well.
In this repost I hope I did modify all your "wishes" except flipping the image. I did this but it does not feel fine to me because I know it's not "right". But that's between my ears.
Thanks again for C&C.
Posted by keith mitchell on November 12, 2012 at 8:42 AM
Discussion
10 repliesDon't know if it is the same bird as in my last post. But it's possible.
BG little darker then the first post of the Robin.
Exif: 500mm, 1/80sec, F5.6, ISO 640, EV -2/3
C&C Welcome en thanks for looking.
Classic Robin pic. Can I make some suggestions ?
Crop a little tighter .Take quite a bit off the top, Try to get the bird looking into the pic from the bottom left.
Just my personal opinion.
Cheers
JR
David
Bob
Oscar
Nick.
Keith.
In this repost I hope I did modify all your "wishes" except flipping the image. I did this but it does not feel fine to me because I know it's not "right". But that's between my ears.
Thanks again for C&C.
Keith.