Posted by Joseph Campisi on November 19, 2012 at 8:32 PM
This is actually one of my favorite shots recently from Cle Elum. I was struck by the graceful, understated colors of these aspens, and I processed this with the intention of preserving that mood and feeling. Which version shows best? I'd love to hear opinions!
This first version is pretty close to what I saw, with lower contrast and muted colors.
Posted by Joseph Campisi on November 19, 2012 at 8:35 PM
This version is with the contrast increased considerably, causing the trunks to stand out in stark relief.
Posted by Joseph Campisi on November 19, 2012 at 8:40 PM
This third version is somewhere in the middle...
Posted by Scott Smorra on November 19, 2012 at 8:49 PM
Version 3 works best for me Joe. 1 is a bit too flat, 2 is a bit too much contrast, and 3 is just about perfect. Very nice image by the way. I like the subtle colors.
Posted by John Williams on November 19, 2012 at 9:19 PM
I like number 3, but what I think I like is that the saturation is getting a bump as portions of the photo darken. My recommendation is the first with a saturation bump. You don't have to make it crazy, just enough to give it a bit more color contrast. I really like the _lack_ of contrast in the first, it gives it a refined look. Regardless, this is a very nice photo Joe!
Posted by Joseph Campisi on November 19, 2012 at 10:05 PM
Thanks for your input John. This scene reminded me of similar shots I've seen from you in the past. Is this version what you had in mind?
Posted by Steve Kennedy on November 20, 2012 at 1:17 AM
Hi Joe! I'm partial to the 4th version. I think John's suggestions were right on and you processed it well. Nice photo!
Posted by wade pettitt on November 20, 2012 at 5:41 PM
I think I would like third but with more saturation. The aspens are a little gray for my taste without the contrast boost, but, heck, it's a winner any way you look at it. One consideration....did you try cropping. The close and more full tree to the right pulls my eye. Not sure how it would look without it, but you might play with crops.
Either number 3 or number 4, Joe. #1 is so brilliantly understated that I am enamored with that one. I'd try brushing over the tree trunks with a "dodge highlights" brush at a very low setting; then, use the burn brush on the grasses for both highlights and midtones, again at a low setting. I'm hoping the results will be YUMMmmmmmy.
Posted by John Williams on November 28, 2012 at 12:22 PM
Definitely the final one for me Joe. I really like the softness, where the color contrast is emphasized more than the luminance. I played with web cropping after reading Marylynne's post, and I think a crop of just the upper left part of the image is a really cool abstract. I don't prefer it to this one; I like both.
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10 repliesThis first version is pretty close to what I saw, with lower contrast and muted colors.