Hi Keith, well you have the detail and sharpness and a BKG we all strive to get. I like the DOF, pose, moss covered rock and the curvature of the tail, although I do agree, it's a little too tight on the LHS, putting the camera framing a bit more to the left would have been ideal. For me it looks a bit too much yellow coming through and some simple adjustments in Selective Colour I think would bring it more in balance overall. I will pop some thoughts over to you, easy steps you can try.
Keep up the good work.
TFS
Steve
Posted by Neil Burton on December 7, 2012 at 5:23 AM
Agree with the yellow, specially on the fur highlights. Tight on the left but a cracking shot with great dof!
Posted by Andy Astbury on December 7, 2012 at 7:43 AM
Those highlights in the tail are very hot Keith and the image has an overall greenish yellow cast.
I shoot these little darlings in a place I suspect similar to yours in that they are surrounded by green and sitting on green so they look greenish where ever they are touched by reflected light - usually in the lower midtones and shadow areas.
Your eye compensates for this to a great degree, but the camera can't.
So you should really correct it on a localised basis - easy enough to do in the green point curve inside Photoshop, or better still, in your raw processor.
Posted by David Sewell on December 7, 2012 at 7:52 AM
It is a great background, as Steve noted, but personally I find a square crop rarely works and a little more horizontal space on both sides would have been good. Still a fine portrait though, and could probably be even better with a little tweaking.
'So you should really correct it on a localised basis - easy enough to do in the green point curve inside Photoshop, or better still, in your raw processor.' Good call Mr A.
Posted by Bob Johnson on December 7, 2012 at 8:28 AM
Smart enough Keith. I like the yellow tinge to the BG as its a bit different so I personally would just take it out of the squirrel
Bob
Posted by Andy Shepherd on December 7, 2012 at 11:11 AM
Another beauty and some good advice given, Keith.
Andy...
Posted by Nick Mckeown on December 7, 2012 at 11:28 AM
Minor nits covered Keith...cracking squirrel shot Sir!
Nick.
Posted by keith mitchell on December 7, 2012 at 12:13 PM
Done a bit of work on the Squirrel itself is that any better?
You are heading in the right direction Keith, but think, when you have time, you can still do more from the capture you have.
Steve
Posted by John Robinson on December 7, 2012 at 9:47 PM
In my humble opinion it still is crying out for more space/ canvas on the right. The head is way over the half way line. I cant see much difference in the colour to be honest which didn't bother me in the first place,but I have colour blindness problems anyway
But what do I know ?
I am still leaarning.
JR
Posted by Phil Ellard on December 9, 2012 at 8:57 AM
cracking subject and pose the "perch" and BG really do compliment
Posted by David Taylor on December 9, 2012 at 11:41 AM
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14 repliesNikon 300ml 2.8
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Thanks for looking and your comments and tips on my last image.
Nice, only nit is the closeness of the tail to the left edge,
Ian
Keep up the good work.
TFS
Steve
I shoot these little darlings in a place I suspect similar to yours in that they are surrounded by green and sitting on green so they look greenish where ever they are touched by reflected light - usually in the lower midtones and shadow areas.
Your eye compensates for this to a great degree, but the camera can't.
So you should really correct it on a localised basis - easy enough to do in the green point curve inside Photoshop, or better still, in your raw processor.
David
Bob
Another beauty and some good advice given, Keith.
Andy...
Nick.
Thanks a lot for the tips.
Steve
But what do I know ?
I am still leaarning.
JR