For me the long-exposure blurring of waves doesn't work, it's just a personal aesthetic or something, the calmness often seems a bit forced with the long-exposure blurs in the water. All IMHO and all; nice composition, and I'm assuming the sky will come more alive when I look at it on my calibrated monitor at home tonight....don't let me discourage you. A certain number of viewers may have my view about the long-exposure technique, maybe it's a gene in the population or something, your composition is great and the colors are vivid.
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