Autumn Remnant w/repost (square)
by Vance Gese
Made this image of a hillside in the fall a few years ago in the Matanuska River Valley which is northeast of Anchorage, Alaska. I liked the almost abstract design of the bare aspens against the fallen leaves and vegetation of the hillside and the single bush, probably a willow, still glowing yellow. While this image doesn't really showcase the beauty, the Matanuska Valley in the autumn is incredible.
4x5, 210mm, Velvia.
Large image provided.
Comments, suggestions, critiques all welcome.
Thanks.
Comments
45 commentsgeorg
are so many of the elements of art here--color, lines, and textures. Perfect
placement of the yellow willow in the compositon. It's kind of abstract too which
I like.
I do like Stan's crop suggestion, though it works well for me as it is right now. Good stuff!
COS
Great image - very original! I agree with the square crop. I would recommend cropping from the top down to where the trees indent and then whatever you need to crop from the left to make it square. I think the crop would place more emphasis on the yellow tree, and isolate that great triangle of trees which adds to the abstract/geometric quality about this great image. Love it!!!
Wayne
Gotta tell you that your images here are some of the best. Great eye for composition and really good light. I hope I'm as successful as you when I retire
Here's my try at a square crop. Have only done a square crop on one other image as I tend to see the world in 4x5, so hope it works. I sort of like the S-curve of the line of leafless aspens in the full-frame image but certainly do like the more graphic emphasis that the square provides, as several of you suggested. See what you think.
Thanks again. Your input is so very helpful to this old guy.
- Dan.
John
The 4x5 image for me. Cropping loses the cool tones and eliminates the conflict with the yellow tree. It also eliminates the almost abstract properties of the image.
:)
Wonderful
Lon