Still-life with seaweed
by Julian Barkway
Sometimes nature presents you with something so perfectly arranged that all you need to do is to set the camera up in front of it... So it was with this seaweed, found on the foreshore at Pirate's Cove on the Scottish island of Arran. I didn't need to move a single bit of it and my only regret is that I didn't go in really close as the full-size scan reveals many interesting compositions within the overall scene. C'est la vie.
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Ebony 45SU,
150mm Scheider APO Symmar L with polariser,
Velvia 50,
6" @ f22.
Comments
15 commentsJohn
A very elegant image. The metallic bronze colors are very appealing. Compositionally speaking - the image feels slightly out-of-balance with a lot less going on in the FG. I really like the little isolated piece of seaweed in the LLC, but the image looks slightly underexposed there. The colors look a little streteched to me in that area and quite flat. I think I would add quite a bit of vignetting in the FG corners and try to punch up the contrast a little to better balance out the scene. Overall, this is very original and I like it very much. I hope this helps. Michael
The lower part of the image lies in a shallow rockpool, which is why it's about a stop under what it should be. I should have compensated in the field with a grad but didn't think of it at the time...
Do you mean I should add a vignette to the one that's already there? I darkened down the corners slightly but didn't want to make it look too obvious. I guess I succeeded.
SS
I think I'll just stare at this for awhile.
Chris