Port Willunga Beach

Gallery: Man & NaturePosted February 18, 201086 views8 comments

135mm manual lens, two images blended. Should I do something about the bright cloud on the top right edge?

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8 comments

Comment posted by Patricia Brundage on February 18, 2010 at 7:18 AM

Stunning light, comp, detail and dof. The inclusion of the young lady emphasis the scale. The cloud doesn't bother me, but it always can be cropped out.

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Comment posted by Bob&Charly Nelson on February 18, 2010 at 12:51 PM

I really like this as posted Peter. The addition of the person adds good depth, and the light clouds don't bother me at all. Good job.

Bob

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Comment posted by R.Bill Moser on February 18, 2010 at 2:15 PM

Beautiful warm light. The cloud doesn't bother me. good idea to include the person in this scene.

Registered on January 29, 2010, 285 Posts, 4281 Comments

Comment posted by Nick Bristol on February 18, 2010 at 3:56 PM

Nice light here Peter. The person on the beach is a nice addition to this image. I think it looks fine as it is, but with just a scroll crop down from the top to just below the cloud in the urc I think it looks even better. I like how it raises the horizon line in the frame and just seems to balance a little better (just my feeling). Good as is too. Hope it helps.

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Comment posted by Dan Moore on February 18, 2010 at 7:41 PM

Very pleasing image. I do not think I would have had any concerns with the cloud but the fact that you mentioned it says that you do. I shielded it and it looks great either way. Thanks for posting this!

Dan

Registered on February 11, 2010, 143 Posts, 1248 Comments

Comment posted by Larry Gloth on February 21, 2010 at 1:20 AM

Beautiful image. Great light and color throughout. Love the composition, Cloud doesn't bother me. Well done.

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Comment posted by Stuart Williams on February 21, 2010 at 1:32 PM

very good - i like everything about this - the top cloud is a minor nit only. lovely light and well captured.

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Comment posted by Floris van Breugel on February 24, 2010 at 2:13 AM

Oh I love scale, such an excellent use of the human figure here. Wonderful light as well. The clouds doesn't bother me, but if you like you could crop it.

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