Gallery: LandscapePosted April 6, 2010217 views11 comments
Location : Semeti Beach Lombok Indonesia
1Ds3 + 16-35mk2 + GND 0.6 soft
F : 16
S : 1.6s
ISO : 100
Please give me critics to improve my technique, thank you
Comments
11 comments
Comment posted by Giovanni Allievi on April 6, 2010 at 10:07 AM
Hi Fadil,
I think you managed the contrast very well here.
The composition might be improved a bit imo, as my eyes don't find an anchor point.
Very nice colors indeed.
Giovanni.
Registered on March 26, 2008, 87 Posts, 379 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Moore on April 6, 2010 at 10:27 AM
Very nice colours, perhaps a little hot in a couple of areas of sky, but overall exposure handled well. I like the composition alot, the foreground rocks frame the scene well, and the cove and middle shoreline lead my eyes to the sun. Very nice.
Registered on May 23, 2006, 93 Posts, 2228 Comments
Comment posted by Abdullaziz Bin Ali on April 6, 2010 at 2:05 PM
The place is absolutely beautiful even the composition
however, it seems some areas are overexposed
Regards :)
Registered on May 31, 2009, 112 Posts, 1590 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Chambers on April 6, 2010 at 3:30 PM
I like the overall scene, especially the fractured rocks in the FG. Very pretty water action too.
Registered on April 10, 2005, 753 Posts, 21216 Comments
Comment posted by Luis Argerich on April 6, 2010 at 7:17 PM
Fantastic image Fadil, love the composition, light and exposure. Really fantastic.
Registered on December 22, 2009, 91 Posts, 1349 Comments
Comment posted by Jeremy Kessler on April 6, 2010 at 8:04 PM
Beautiful Image
Registered on September 13, 2007, 36 Posts, 1283 Comments
Comment posted by Walt Sterneman on April 6, 2010 at 8:32 PM
Beautiful place Fadil. The light and your handling of the contrast was quite good. I like the way the water angles through the photograph, and I like that you did not blurr the water too much making it look like fog. I also like the colors and the way the blues and browns compliment each other.
Registered on March 24, 2010, 73 Posts, 1268 Comments
Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on April 6, 2010 at 9:51 PM
Sumptuous comp and light. Reminds me somewhat of Michael Anderson's work.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 364 Posts, 22328 Comments
Comment posted by Rick Lundh on April 7, 2010 at 1:25 AM
Really strong comp...perhaps a little bright on the left side. Please critique more images as well...
Registered on April 28, 2004, 774 Posts, 4351 Comments
Comment posted by Matt Anderson on April 7, 2010 at 7:42 AM
Fadil, IMHO the glowing blue water is what draws me in. I think you need to tame the highlights exposure a bit.
Registered on September 6, 2007, 346 Posts, 2696 Comments
Comment posted by Alex Mody on April 7, 2010 at 5:15 PM
Wow, this is really nice. The only critique I can think of for this spectacular image would be that some of the highlights appear blown out, and that perhaps you could have tried to digitally blend exposures instead of using a GND due to the irregular shape of the middle ground and sky.
Registered on December 25, 2007, 163 Posts, 1896 Comments
Comments
11 commentsI think you managed the contrast very well here.
The composition might be improved a bit imo, as my eyes don't find an anchor point.
Very nice colors indeed.
Giovanni.
however, it seems some areas are overexposed
Regards :)