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by John Fan

Gallery: WildlifePosted August 25, 2010188 views12 comments
I decided to join the party. This is my first post to introduce myself. I am looking for critiques to improve my photography, so C&C are appreciated. Thanks in advance.

This is a picture of a frog laying on a lotus leaf, taken at a local park.

Camera: SONY A900
Lens: 70-400mm @ 400mm

Comments

12 comments
Comment posted by Philip Hodgkins on August 25, 2010 at 7:28 PM
Welcome to NPN! This is the greatest place I know of to learn nature phtography!

I like the composition, color and detail of this photo. I like the meniscus of water on the lily pad, giving a sense of the liquid environment. My only nit is the partial pad on the left. It is just unnecessary to the composition
Registered on July 24, 2006, 2741 Posts, 12349 Comments
Comment posted by Richard Teller on August 25, 2010 at 8:05 PM
Very nice image. I agree with everything Philip said. The small piece of lily pad on the left doesn't really bother me, but it would make the composition a little cleaner.
Registered on August 23, 2010, 1162 Posts, 6692 Comments
Comment posted by Mauro Pasquero on August 26, 2010 at 4:19 AM
Welcome on board, John! This is a callenging place where you can learn a lot.

Nice first post: good compo and colors. Yet I share Phil's remark.
In future remember to enclose a "larger version" for a better evaluation of the image and all the relevant technical info. :wavey:

Mauro
Registered on January 21, 2010, 650 Posts, 2500 Comments
Comment posted by Neil Rossmiller on August 26, 2010 at 9:40 AM
Hi John and welcome to NPN.
I like the image as posted, but agree it would be a bit stronger graphically without the partial pad. The problem would then become the fading stem disappearing into the depths. I think I'd leave it as is.
Cool shot! I'll look forward to seeing more of your images.
Neil
Registered on October 30, 2009, 156 Posts, 749 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Sharp on August 26, 2010 at 9:50 AM
Your choice of exposure is very nice. I like this as posted and don't find the partial pad to be a significant distraction. IF it were not in the frame, I would think the frog should then be a little higher in the frame, moving the eye slightly out of center. The dark water and rich greens are very effective.
Welcome to NPN. I look forward to your participation! Please take a few moments and share your reactions to some of the other postings!
Registered on December 9, 2007, 258 Posts, 9892 Comments
Comment posted by Jagdeep Rajput on August 26, 2010 at 10:36 AM
Welcome to NPN ! It has all been said.
Jagdeep Rajput
Registered on April 29, 2008, 686 Posts, 2857 Comments
Comment posted by John Fan on August 26, 2010 at 1:03 PM
Thanks for the comments from all of you. Looking forward to a lot of fun with the gang.
Registered on August 24, 2010, 135 Posts, 489 Comments
Comment posted by Vincent Grafhorst on August 26, 2010 at 1:29 PM
Hi John and welcome to NPN :wavey: . This is very nice and well done. I do not really mind the parial pad on the left. The only thing that bothers me a bit is that the image is not level. Perhaps that was done intentionally, but it just does not feel natural to me seeing water out of level :wink: .
You came to the right place to learn about photography John and from experience I can say that one can learn as much, and probably even more, from critiquing other people's images, so don't hesitate to jump in and comment on other images.
Registered on February 24, 2006, 504 Posts, 7203 Comments
Comment posted by Balakumar Kaushik on August 26, 2010 at 2:06 PM
Beautiful image with lovely rich colours and a neat exposure.
Personally, I do not think the leaf on upper-left to be a distraction. In fact I feel that its presence adds a lot to this image.
Registered on January 4, 2008, 98 Posts, 1403 Comments
Comment posted by Catherine Reilly on August 26, 2010 at 7:52 PM
HI, John, and welcome to NPN. Cool first post. I like the story it tells: the perfect amphibian environment- wet; the support and relaxation the frog enjoys from the leaf; froggie is heavy enough to sink the leaf, which the water tension lines delineate so well. As to the controversial partial pad on the left- too bad there aren't more partials in the frame for some balance and "biodensity," but it seems just fine as is to me.
Registered on August 16, 2006, 603 Posts, 9192 Comments
Comment posted by Kurt Bowman on August 27, 2010 at 10:07 AM
Welcome to NPN John! This is a fine first post :toast: Ihave to say, the additional pad doesn't bother me at all. It even makes me feel, the frog is ready to jump to it if he desires. I do however agree with Vincent about the angle of the shot. At first glamce, I think a little lower abngle (if that was possible) would be nice, but more importantly, the shot not being level is what is most distracting. It is an easy fix to rotate this and IMO, I think it would make a stronger image. Look forward to seeing more from you! :toast:
Registered on June 19, 2008, 1005 Posts, 8028 Comments
Comment posted by Ákos Lumnitzer on September 2, 2010 at 7:54 PM
Very nice comp and great subject matter. I really like it. :smile:
Registered on April 24, 2004, 25 Posts, 510 Comments