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Egret with REPOST

by Andrew Sentipal

Gallery: AvianPosted August 26, 201088 views4 comments
I was trying to get a little closer to this Snowy but he was not willing. I shot this as a horizontal but changed it to a vertical here. Nikon D300 F10 1/1250 ISO 250 with Nikon 300mm.

Comments please. I learn from every post.

Comments

4 comments
Comment posted by Ron Bielefeld on August 26, 2010 at 9:09 PM
Andrew, looks like your exposure was right on for this very bright, white bird. I hope you do not mind if I make a few suggestions for improving this image and future images you take. First, I would apply quite a bit of clock-wise rotation to this image before you crop it to straighten it out. Use the neck of the bird and the reflected neck in the water to correct the tilt. They should form a vertical line. Once you straighten the image, then crop it for composition. Second, I would consider leaving this as a horizontal comp keeping the bird and the full reflection, but eliminating the darker BG elements near the top. To me doing this will keep the focus more on the bird. In future shots such as this, it would be really nice if you can get eye contact with your subject. Doing so tends to draw the viewer into the image, making them a part of it and thus making the image stronger. Lastly, and this has nothing to do with image impact or quality, but just something I thought you might like to know, this is a great egret and not a snowy. Note the large size and the large yellow beak. Snowies are about half the size of this bird and have a blackish beak. I hope this helps. Cheers. :smile:
Registered on December 6, 2008, 360 Posts, 7132 Comments
Comment posted by Dennis Plank on August 26, 2010 at 11:34 PM
Very good job on the exposure and it looks like the focus is good at this scale. I agree with Ron's points otherwise, though I'd have to see your original framing to pick a crop that I'd like. there can be a lot of constraining factors. :toast:
Registered on January 28, 2008, 1767 Posts, 23192 Comments
Comment posted by Andrew Sentipal on August 27, 2010 at 5:37 PM
Here is a straightened great egret with a little of the "junk" in the water removed and a little lighter.

Which is better horizontal or vertical ? Lighter or darker ?

Thanks !!!!
Registered on February 16, 2008, 200 Posts, 317 Comments
Comment posted by Dennis Plank on August 27, 2010 at 6:23 PM
Hi, Andrew. I definitely prefer your repost. It feels a lot sunnier, and even though the egret is smaller in the frame, it works better as a composition. :toast:
Registered on January 28, 2008, 1767 Posts, 23192 Comments