Hydranga macropyhlla nor
by Bob Duff
What intriques me about this hydranga is the detailed florascape of the lacecap bloom. It appears to me a new world. What i was trying to accomplish in this image was protray one of secrecy, intimacy and mysteriousness. Does it work?
Canon 5D mkII 90mm T/S
All comments and critiques welcomed but, what I really would like know is what works well and what could/should be done to take the image to a higher level.
Thanks for looking
Comments
12 commentsI would suggest adding just a bit more canvas on the right. I think if you were to crop from the left, you would only end up turning this into a mundane picture. I think turning this into a panoramic 9x16 would be awesome. My 2-cents LOL
Carol
I like the comp for the most part. I might crop in a little from the left but I'm not sure about that. I'd probably lighten the ride side a bit. The light is fine but nothing that really grabs me and causes me to say Ahhhh... The subject is interesting to me. Ideally for my tastes the back petal would be in sharp focus - I'm guessing you'd have to stack to accomplish that. There's not enough strong pattern or rich color in this to really get my attention. These are of course pretty much all subjective assessments on my part. I do like the concept of the image but find it weaker than your initial light box series, all of which I liked very much.
Pat
I like this. The edge effect on the single bloom alone with a black bg is enough to carry this image and the buds at the bottom is a nice addition. I support the idea of a crop from the left. Nicely conceived and captured.