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Day of Atonement
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Day of Atonement

by Carol Hyman

Gallery: FloraPosted September 15, 201075 views13 comments
May You All Be Inscribed and Sealed (in the Book of Life) for a Good Year.

Back in early August, I acquired a bouquet of Stargazer Lilium and shot and shot and shot :smile:

This is the final image of the series. I came out one morning to discover the few remaining petals and pollen scattered on the floor. In the vase all that was left was the stem and a few leaves.

This was shot with a small Leica P&S--the Leica D-Lux4 @ f/2.8, ISO 80, .6 s, manual exposure, spot metering. I don't remember if I used a tripod or hand-held the camera. (Too bad that info isn't embedded in the EXIF data :wink:)

I removed one vertical leaf from the left and cropped the right portion of the image to remove the part of the shot that picked up some extraneous background debris.

As I worked on the image, I wanted to achieve a sense of hope for the future as portrayed by the upper back-lit leaf. I also felt that the large leaf symbolically showed the scars of life.

I deliberately left the small stem on the right side in the image as a third diagonal pointing the eye to the large leaf.

Now that's an element that I would like your opinion on. Sometimes I look at the image and say, Yay!, other times, I think the image would be better without that small stem.

Thank you for looking and leaving your comments and suggestions.

Best wishes to all for the New Year,

Carol



Comments

13 comments
Comment posted by Phil Pogledich on September 15, 2010 at 1:56 PM
It's kind of funny you raise the issue of that small stem, because my first thought (before reading your comment) was to suggest that you consider axing it. I find it a bit distracting personally, but it's a pretty minor thing. Otherwise I really like the image!
Registered on August 24, 2009, 123 Posts, 3099 Comments
Comment posted by Mauro Pasquero on September 15, 2010 at 2:59 PM
Unusual and intriguin image, Carol. Well done and well presented !
I like it as it is, with the small stem on the right. IMO it is better balanced.
Mauro
Registered on January 21, 2010, 650 Posts, 2500 Comments
Comment posted by Bob Duff on September 15, 2010 at 4:08 PM
Carol, I like what you have done with this image. I think it is the best of the series. I was like Phil when I first looked at the image re the small stem. But, upon studying it more, I think it should stay. I also see the green coming through on the main stem and then along the edge of the lower leaf. At least that's what my laptop lcd shows. If that is your intent and the small upper leaf is to represent hope then I might consider adding some fo the green to that leaf as well with the green flowing up the main stem to the upper leaf (slightly more green thaqn the lower one.) Just my paltry $.02 worth.

On a more important note. All the very best to you for the New Year. Keep shooting and keep smiling. :smile:
Registered on April 21, 2010, 160 Posts, 1675 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Duval on September 15, 2010 at 9:16 PM
The real shallow depth of field hurts the image slightly on the outside edges, but it is a contemplative scene and a first impression that may change as I contemplate it more. I do like the dark background and the way the plant seems to float in space.

Paul
Registered on June 30, 2009, 508 Posts, 1907 Comments
Comment posted by Ramamohan Pai on September 15, 2010 at 10:01 PM
I admire this photo more for its composition :cool: . I like the placement of the leaves originating point around the thirds and everything radiating from there. No one may give a second look at this kind of subject and I admire how you made it look photogenic.

Good experimentation, Carol.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 550 Posts, 9037 Comments
Comment posted by Pat Sampson on September 15, 2010 at 10:22 PM
Carol,

I like this a lot and would put it on my wall in a second. Very strong comp and great light I think. I'd probably clone out the partial but I'm ok with it as is too. I certainly think the composition has a more balanced and classic feel to it with the partial stem gone but even so, this is one of my favorites.

Pat
Registered on May 19, 2007, 953 Posts, 15989 Comments
Comment posted by Albert Darmo on September 15, 2010 at 10:36 PM
Hi Carol. I'm glad ram likes your composition and appreciates your work. I enjoy your experimentation and find that The light and lines convey a spiritual power . keep up the good work.
Albert Darmo. Canada
Registered on November 25, 2008, 1386 Posts, 11978 Comments
Comment posted by Ian Wolfenden on September 16, 2010 at 7:28 AM
Very original composition, Carol and beautiful lighting. Like the idea behind it too. I like the extra bit of stem, I think because it takes the eye into the depths, while the main subject holds us to the frontal plane. Just my HO !!
Registered on May 18, 2007, 1108 Posts, 7647 Comments
Comment posted by Gary Yeoh on September 16, 2010 at 8:12 AM
Carol:
Like Phil and Bob, I looked at the image before reading your commentary and thought that the small stem should not be there. The rest of the image is very powerful and poetic; I like you vision, creativity and execution.
Registered on September 1, 2009, 588 Posts, 8184 Comments
Comment posted by Wayne Rhodus on September 16, 2010 at 9:22 AM
Interesting shot Carol. For my tastes I think this would benefit from the small stem being removed. There is a lot of negative space and a minimalist feel to this so removing that small stem would only strengthen those attributes. Nice work.
Registered on November 16, 2003, 157 Posts, 3326 Comments
Comment posted by Morris McClung on September 16, 2010 at 8:39 PM
Amen!
The image is a story unto itself. Excellent work!
Registered on May 7, 2007, 670 Posts, 19650 Comments
Comment posted by Miro Susta on September 17, 2010 at 9:23 PM
I like this Carol. IMO better than the previous one. I like the very nice arrangement and excellent light. Well done. :smile:
Registered on August 18, 2006, 719 Posts, 3736 Comments
Comment posted by Howard Cheek on September 19, 2010 at 11:12 AM
Artsy image Carol, really like this.
The ? of the small stem is a personal call, and in the final analysis a matter of taste or preference..
I'm leaning towards removal :wink:
Well done :toast: :toast:
Registered on July 24, 2008, 1201 Posts, 10758 Comments