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Mystery species

by scott lanz

Gallery: FloraPosted October 10, 2010207 views14 comments
OK, just another dahlia. But sort of a mystery. The local metroparks gardens has a trial dahlia garden for trying out new species. It's one of the seven certified dahlia "trial" gardens in the country. Makes for some great material. Comments appreciated.

Comments

14 comments
Comment posted by Carol Hyman on October 10, 2010 at 10:43 AM
Scott, I think that drop of water makes the shot. I don't know how large your image is; however if there's enough image real estate, a 1:1 crop with that drop positioned on the cusp of the lower third on the right (give or take) would be quite a picture.

Think about it.

Cheers,

Carol
Registered on January 18, 2007, 597 Posts, 8062 Comments
Comment posted by Pat Sampson on October 10, 2010 at 11:47 AM
I like the framing of the flower Scott and the droplet. I also like the color palette and your dof decision. I'm not sure about the viewer's upper right corner. It draws my eye some and seems to compete with the droplet and the center of the flower for my attention. Still a beautiful image as posted.

Pat
Registered on May 19, 2007, 953 Posts, 15989 Comments
Comment posted by scott lanz on October 10, 2010 at 12:24 PM
Carol, Pat, thanks for the comments. I shot this both ways - with the complete flower and the resulting blank urc, and a cropped version which is basically just like the bottom 1/2 of this image. Personally, I think I prefer the comp with the entire flower, but I was curious what others thought including whether the urc was a problem.
Registered on November 14, 2003, 840 Posts, 12902 Comments
Comment posted by Richard Sogn on October 10, 2010 at 3:18 PM
I have to disagree with the above comments. I like everything about the photograph, except the droplet, and find it distracting. My eye keeps being pulled down into the oblivious blur at the bottom of the photo, instead of focussing on the wonderful detail of the dahlia.
Registered on January 17, 2007, 68 Posts, 210 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Fach on October 10, 2010 at 3:28 PM
Scott: The drop is the icing on a very fine cake. The dahlia images have really been top notch lately and this one is in my top ten for sure. Really well done.>=))>
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1805 Posts, 26981 Comments
Comment posted by Nathan Buck on October 10, 2010 at 3:38 PM
I think it all works very well together Scott. For me, I think the droplet makes it a different shot. Nice focal point and comp. For me, I don't know that the URC is that big of a deal. One think that seems a bit off to me (at least on my laptop screen) is the color. The color seems a bit too cool, or a bit hazy, or something - I can't quite put my finger on it.

Nathan
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1101 Posts, 13589 Comments
Comment posted by Morris McClung on October 10, 2010 at 3:54 PM
A very striking comp and with great color. Love the dof as well. :toast:
Registered on May 7, 2007, 670 Posts, 19650 Comments
Comment posted by Elisabeth Czwikla on October 10, 2010 at 5:48 PM
this is lovely, I like the drop, but not sure about the blue corner.
Registered on December 9, 2007, 145 Posts, 852 Comments
Comment posted by Ramamohan Pai on October 10, 2010 at 8:37 PM
My thoughts mirror more or less what Nathan said. This is a composition I like very much with all the frontal petals significantly blurred so that they don't become a distraction. Even without the water drop it would be a great photo. I do see what Nathan mentions about WB and/or Haziness. Something you might want to check.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 550 Posts, 9037 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Windom on October 10, 2010 at 11:47 PM
Amazing how much a small droplet of water can add to an image. :toast:
Registered on November 1, 2003, 176 Posts, 2302 Comments
Comment posted by Catherine Reilly on October 11, 2010 at 1:40 AM
Great job Scott. I think the success of this image depends on what you want the viewer to see: the details of the dahlia and it's color, pattern, etc., OR the droplet. To allow the viewer the enticement of both dahlia details and droplet I think Carol is right on with suggesting a different crop of this image-- crop down to eliminate all the blue urc, and in just a little from the left. What do you think, if you look at it that way? To me, pretty cool...

Thanks for your thoughtful comment on my cram/blur zinnia experiment.
Registered on August 16, 2006, 603 Posts, 9192 Comments
Comment posted by Brigitte Lorenz on October 11, 2010 at 2:17 AM
beautiful colors and comp....the droplet is a nice addition..I like this very much

Brigitte









Registered on January 10, 2009, 187 Posts, 1507 Comments
Comment posted by Albert Darmo on October 11, 2010 at 8:01 PM
Hi Scott :wavey: A very interesting composition that captures the attention :eek: The color and water drop adds to the presentation :smile:
Albert Darmo. Canada
Registered on November 25, 2008, 1386 Posts, 11978 Comments
Comment posted by Gary Yeoh on October 11, 2010 at 8:51 PM
Scott:
Got to love that drop - makes such a difference to the shot. Well done.
Registered on September 1, 2009, 588 Posts, 8184 Comments