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Green Vortex + Repost
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Green Vortex + Repost

by Chad Merrell

Gallery: FloraPosted November 20, 201075 views17 comments
Taken in evening light after the rain.
f/29
1/3 sec -1 step
ISO 100
35mm
Suggestions appreciated. Thanks

Comments

17 comments
Comment posted by Bill Fach on November 20, 2010 at 6:17 PM
Chad: Frame filling fantastic! I like the energy in the shot and the drops are real plus elements. Really well done.>=))>
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1805 Posts, 26981 Comments
Comment posted by Phillip Noll on November 20, 2010 at 6:22 PM
Nice composition and I love the rain drops on the leaves. Seems a bit too bright to me. Perhaps drop the exposure little? :toast:
Registered on November 17, 2003, 207 Posts, 1083 Comments
Comment posted by Pat Sampson on November 20, 2010 at 9:18 PM
Striking image Chad. Very fine composition. No real suggestions on my part. If you wanted to play with it some you could probably increase the sense of depth by doing a little selective darkening in the areas that would be in shadow. Not a real suggestion, merely something to play with maybe.

pat
Registered on May 19, 2007, 953 Posts, 15989 Comments
Comment posted by Chad Merrell on November 20, 2010 at 9:42 PM
Thanks guys. Phillip- I have darkened it just a little and agree that it helps.
Registered on July 8, 2010, 91 Posts, 304 Comments
Comment posted by Barbara Graham on November 20, 2010 at 10:16 PM
I really like this. The composition and the lines are really, really nice, really appealing and satisfying. I agree about the slight darkening. I'd love to see a repost of that if you'd like to do a repost. :toast:
Registered on July 27, 2010, 1310 Posts, 5035 Comments
Comment posted by Chad Merrell on November 21, 2010 at 12:38 AM
Let's try this for a repost. A little darkening and a little curves adjustment.
Registered on July 8, 2010, 91 Posts, 304 Comments
Comment posted by Chad Merrell on November 21, 2010 at 12:39 AM
Should have darkened more. Doesn't look much different after web conversion but there was a noticable difference
Registered on July 8, 2010, 91 Posts, 304 Comments
Comment posted by Barbara Graham on November 21, 2010 at 8:05 AM
I do see a difference, and I like it. I think if they were side by side the difference would be easy to see, but if you scroll back and forth you can see it.
Registered on July 27, 2010, 1310 Posts, 5035 Comments
Comment posted by Keshav Kumar on November 21, 2010 at 8:56 AM
This is a very refreshing image. I like every bit about it but for the small parrot green rectangle on the middle left of the frame. It just seems odd and out of place.
Registered on June 3, 2008, 16 Posts, 42 Comments
Comment posted by Pat Sampson on November 21, 2010 at 9:22 AM
I prefer the repost Chad. I might still have done a bit more as you say but I think the repost makes for a stronger image.

pat
Registered on May 19, 2007, 953 Posts, 15989 Comments
Comment posted by Carol Hyman on November 21, 2010 at 2:27 PM
Beautiful raindrops and lines, Chad.

If this were mine, I would be tempted to add a neutral gradient to selectively lighten and darken areas of your composition to add more interest.

Carol
Registered on January 18, 2007, 597 Posts, 8062 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Fach on November 21, 2010 at 3:36 PM
Chad: The repost is subtly different but positively so. Nice work. I edited your title to reflect that there is a repost. You can do the same on your end and should whenever you put a repost in the original thread. >=))>
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1805 Posts, 26981 Comments
Comment posted by Gary Yeoh on November 21, 2010 at 10:06 PM
Chad:
Refreshing green and cooling drops. Interesting pattern and lines. The repost only show very marginal difference though. Would still like to see more darkening.
Registered on September 1, 2009, 588 Posts, 8184 Comments
Comment posted by Catherine Reilly on November 22, 2010 at 12:53 AM
Nice water drops and design in the comp. Looks pretty hot in the yellows; did you use a reflector?

P.S. Repost is better; I favor a little more adjustment, but not so as to alter the mood/feeling of your initial idea when you took this. At this point, if it were on my desk, I would try an adjustment layer with selective color > neutrals > fiddle with the yellow slider. Just a thought for one approach. Lots of control as to which colors change and by how much.
Registered on August 16, 2006, 603 Posts, 9192 Comments
Comment posted by Krunal Janani on November 22, 2010 at 1:11 AM
Your choice of DOF has made this image really striking in opinion nice frame filling comp. :toast:
cant comment on which version i like as i m viewing this from an uncalibrated laptop screen :smile:
Registered on September 16, 2010, 60 Posts, 1370 Comments
Comment posted by Albert Darmo on November 22, 2010 at 11:03 PM
Hi Chad :wavey: It.s refreshing to see a lighter than natural false hellebore :biggrin: I have seen too many unnatural dark green ones .. I like the composition and raindrops. It still needs more darkening :smile:
Albert Darmo Canada
Registered on November 25, 2008, 1386 Posts, 11978 Comments
Comment posted by Debashis Bandyopad on November 23, 2010 at 1:17 PM
The repost improves on an already good image... Very well done :toast: :toast:
Registered on June 24, 2007, 130 Posts, 1309 Comments