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Lost World at Night + EDIT II
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Lost World at Night + EDIT II

by Edward Nunez

Gallery: LandscapePosted January 15, 2011495 views23 comments
Salto Angel/Angel Falls, Canaima National Park, Venezuela

3:30am, still on my sleepless night, a long photographic exposure (about 8 minutes) captures the movement of the stars and fog/low hanging clouds through the Lost world.

Any comments/critique for improvement is always appreciated.

Nikon D700
8min @ f/1.4, ISO 400
50mm

Comments

23 comments
Comment posted by Barbara Graham on January 15, 2011 at 5:53 PM
Beautiful. Amazing. I love the colors, clarity, overall impression and mood.
Registered on July 27, 2010, 1310 Posts, 5035 Comments
Comment posted by Paul Wegemann on January 15, 2011 at 6:25 PM
Normally, I don't care for star trails, but here they really add to the scene almost like they are raining light down on the mountain. There's a magical, fairyland quality to this image that I really like. The light, the clouds, the waterfall, and the star trails just come together nicely. Well done, Edward.
Registered on December 14, 2006, 58 Posts, 1888 Comments
Comment posted by Robert Stough on January 15, 2011 at 6:26 PM
Remarkable shot Edward. The composition is excellent and I really like how you've captured what appears to be nearly the full height of the falls themselves. The star trails also work very well here but I do think the overall image might benefit from toning down the brightness of the sky somewhat.
Registered on November 20, 2010, 26 Posts, 273 Comments
Comment posted by dean hebert on January 15, 2011 at 7:24 PM
Beautiful! Definitely a surreal feel to this. I like it alot. :toast:
Registered on August 4, 2010, 70 Posts, 1132 Comments
Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on January 15, 2011 at 7:27 PM
Neat. The stars actually feel like raindrops. Could see cropping a bit more off the bottom or bringing out more detail in the texture.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 364 Posts, 22328 Comments
Comment posted by Marc Adamus on January 15, 2011 at 9:23 PM
A wildly different and exciting image from one of the world's most awe-inspiring locations. The mountain areas would look better quite a bit darker, and the blending/halo needs to be cleaned up IMO, but this really has some potential.
Registered on September 17, 2005, 780 Posts, 8091 Comments
Comment posted by Art Escobado on January 15, 2011 at 9:41 PM
Very interesting image-the fog is too bright and i'd like the foliage a little brighter in the left hand side
Registered on January 7, 2007, 0 Posts, 775 Comments
Comment posted by Edward Nunez on January 16, 2011 at 1:10 AM
Thanks for the comments!

Here is an update incorporating some of the suggested changes: crop from bottom and bit from top, work on the haloing, and darkened a bit more the sky and mountain.
Registered on April 19, 2007, 65 Posts, 711 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Metternich on January 16, 2011 at 1:10 PM
I think it is a cutting edge, mind bending shot :toast: :toast: :toast:

But with substantial processing issues. If you can tackle the issues raised (mainly the major haloing) then it would be more than worth it here! I'm cool with the first version, but that halo is intense and the blend between land and sky looks funky. Looks like two images merged together vs captured in one shot. It does not matter to me how it was caught, but it just looks that way...
Registered on June 19, 2009, 276 Posts, 6240 Comments
Comment posted by Edward Nunez on January 16, 2011 at 1:32 PM
Thanks Mark for your comment, I appreciate it.

I am not an expert in post-processing, but it is being hard processing this one.
It all comes from a single exposure, but in my intent to process the sky by itself and getting rid of the yellowish cast in the sky (to move it to a more natural blue looking sky) it had resulted in the haloing which I greatly reduced in the 2nd post. I will work a bit more on it until I get it right.
Registered on April 19, 2007, 65 Posts, 711 Comments
Comment posted by Gino Cortez on January 16, 2011 at 1:39 PM
Very lovely impressionistic take. I like this a lot.
Registered on November 23, 2010, 57 Posts, 396 Comments
Comment posted by Hamed Musharbak on January 16, 2011 at 3:43 PM
i really like the concept here

this is very different

well done

Hamed
Registered on June 1, 2009, 372 Posts, 2282 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Metternich on January 16, 2011 at 5:38 PM
I understand. That is the tough thing today. Where are the digital labs? I do this service near full time (and sometimes more than full time) now for various artists, but I run into so many photographers these days that have unbelievable raw shots but have yet to get their development skills up to the point where they feel they can "master" their files. It is a huge learning curve and I think sometimes frustrating for people. This is one of those images IMHO that is mind numbing awesome but is going to take some really careful work to get it to look right/or its best...
Registered on June 19, 2009, 276 Posts, 6240 Comments
Comment posted by Marc Adamus on January 16, 2011 at 7:38 PM
Do a 10-20% layered highlight burn in LAB on the fringe around the mountain's edge. Done.
Registered on September 17, 2005, 780 Posts, 8091 Comments
Comment posted by John Mumaw on January 16, 2011 at 8:06 PM
I like this shot so much more than the first one you posted, Ed. This is absolutely amazing!
I agree with the elimination of the halo and cropping the bottom, but I greatly prefer the rich detail you have on the face of the cliff in the first version. In darkening that area, you also lost the detail in that graceful tree to the right of the falls.
An amazing capture of an amazing evening in an amazing place, amigo!
Registered on September 9, 2005, 62 Posts, 2289 Comments
Comment posted by Edward Nunez on January 16, 2011 at 9:42 PM
Marc,

Thanks a lot for the guidance to process the image, and how to handle the halo (burning highlights in LAB mode works great). Here is another version based on the original post, and hopefully better in terms of post-processing. So many things to learn in photoshop, that when you get images like this is when you want to know more in order to get the best out of the RAW file.

John, Hopefully this one still incorporates the detail in the rock, but still manages the other shortcomings. Thanks!
Registered on April 19, 2007, 65 Posts, 711 Comments
Comment posted by Kenn Leonhardt on January 16, 2011 at 10:51 PM
Fundamentally I think this is an amazing shot, and clearly a tricky one to process. The original works best for me, although the haloing did improve in your latest version. Even though there's nothing along the bottom to drum up interest, for whatever reason I prefer the wider view versus the tighter crops. I can't really offer any advice beyond what you've already been given, aside from saying to keep at it. Definitely worth the effort it takes to get this one to perfection.
Registered on March 29, 2008, 27 Posts, 1710 Comments
Comment posted by Lon Overacker on January 16, 2011 at 11:14 PM
Edward,

Both of these captures are fantastic. If I had a preference, it would be this version, and the repost to top things off. What an exotic and phenomenal place you've captured and you've put your own take on it. Well done.

Lon
Registered on November 24, 2006, 521 Posts, 19147 Comments
Comment posted by Steve Sieren on January 17, 2011 at 1:57 AM
I remember this scene from the Planet Earth show. Looks like they forgot to include your take on it Ed. Is it me or do I see a quarrel between two wooers dueling for you appreciation :confused: I wouldn't mind seeing the edges of the cloud darkened. It seems to magically disappear where mountain meets sky on the upper left. Other then that I think the shot works great!
Registered on January 2, 2008, 360 Posts, 5321 Comments
Comment posted by Jack Brauer on January 17, 2011 at 4:49 AM
Incredible!!!
Registered on September 12, 2005, 40 Posts, 627 Comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on January 17, 2011 at 11:43 AM
Wow, this is really fun to look at. Very cool picture, Ed. Nice work getting this one.

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Mark Metternich on January 17, 2011 at 12:47 PM
"Do a 10-20% layered highlight burn in LAB on the fringe around the mountain's edge. Done. "

Fixing it can certainly work, but I'm curious what is causing the haloing in the first place?
Registered on June 19, 2009, 276 Posts, 6240 Comments
Comment posted by Edward Nunez on January 17, 2011 at 12:53 PM
Mark,

The haloing came from treating the sky independently from the rest. I shifted the color, and did a darkening of the sky but it resulted in the haloing because of the way I did that. Even though all elements came from the same RAW image, I treated the image as 2 parts (sky and land) with masks. Obviously, not a good job from my side on that part. The burning highlight in LAB mode in the almost final image definitely helped. I may need to start all over from the RAW file at some point.
Registered on April 19, 2007, 65 Posts, 711 Comments