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Come On

by Raymond D Smith

Gallery: LandscapePosted February 18, 2011282 views17 comments
Its not often that when the lake has frozen that it isn't snow covered. We had such a precipitation free start to the winter that for a few weeks there was no snow on the ice and I managed to find this interesting ice crack, all I had to do was get some interesting light to go with it. Well this is all I got after a few visits, it lasted all of 5 minutes, fleeting at best. It seems to be a trend in my part of the world that the light looks best about an hour or two before sunset then about 15 to 30 minutes before, a layer of clouds rob me of the best light. I guess that's why I keep coming back and back and back...... I feel blessed to just have managed to get this short moment of light on silicon.

The capture was ETTR and the raw was double processed for the tree line. Tony Kuypers masks and actions were used to blend the two together along with luminosity dodging and burning. I feel like the foreground could have been a little simpler and wished the sky was less busy. I am wondering if everything looks cohesive here and that the colours look good. No saturation was added in the raw processing only through TK's saturation masks. This is about the 7th version so I am a little sick of looking at it and need everyone's opinions please.

Canon 5D 17mm iso 100 1/5 sec. Thanks for any and all C&C

Comments

17 comments
Comment posted by Nick Bristol on February 18, 2011 at 3:55 PM
Wow. I love this, Raymond. Your comp really works for me and I love the colors. I really like the looks of all the cracks in the ice. Wonderful detail too. The large version looks fantastic to me. I enjoy looking at this very much.

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
Registered on February 1, 2004, 752 Posts, 14140 Comments
Comment posted by Peter Richter on February 18, 2011 at 3:58 PM
The interplay of the soft clouds and the broken ice makes an excellent composition. A real icy feeling, I like it!

Peter
Registered on November 10, 2010, 218 Posts, 2723 Comments
Comment posted by Steve Sieren on February 18, 2011 at 4:25 PM
Great artistic rendition here Raymond. So much detail it keeps the viewer looking for quite some time!
Registered on January 2, 2008, 360 Posts, 5321 Comments
Comment posted by Adam Gibbs on February 18, 2011 at 4:25 PM
Nicely done Raymond. Whatever processing you have done looks very natural.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 168 Posts, 870 Comments
Comment posted by Bill Chambers on February 18, 2011 at 4:49 PM
Excellent Raymond. The color and texture of the ice look great, and the pastel sky makes it even better.
Registered on April 10, 2005, 753 Posts, 21216 Comments
Comment posted by Ron Pederson on February 18, 2011 at 6:16 PM
Well done, the colors and the glow and complexity of the ice are great. The sky is nice as well - really like the reflection. Nice comp all around...I understand all too well the feeling of processing and reworking something and you can't quite get comfortable with it, but this one looks like it was worth the effort IMO.
Registered on October 19, 2010, 95 Posts, 470 Comments
Comment posted by Benjamin Olson on February 18, 2011 at 6:17 PM
Beautiful! The lines in the ice and the reflected colors on the ice make this image for me! Well done!
Registered on April 7, 2007, 169 Posts, 725 Comments
Comment posted by Stan Rose on February 18, 2011 at 7:28 PM
The color and exposure balance look perfect to me--nice! As you mention, a slightly cleaner fg would have been a nice bonus, but this is still pretty sweet! :smile:
Registered on September 15, 2005, 836 Posts, 17099 Comments
Comment posted by Bruce King on February 18, 2011 at 8:14 PM
This is really cool Raymond. The light reflecting off the ice on the right is fantastic. The sky while not spectacular matches/balances the image perfectly IMO. Nice!
Registered on January 14, 2010, 276 Posts, 2212 Comments
Comment posted by Bob Duff on February 18, 2011 at 8:51 PM
This is just excellent Raymond. The comp is really strong and the colours mirror one another between the ground and sky. It might have been fleeting but it's baked now. Excellent work.
Registered on April 21, 2010, 160 Posts, 1675 Comments
Comment posted by Jason Kim on February 18, 2011 at 10:36 PM
I like this, the processing and amount of saturation look good to me. You could probably push it further if you wanted to, but this feels very natural and works well IMO. The fractured ice and reflected light in the foreground is really nice.
Registered on July 1, 2006, 60 Posts, 1233 Comments
Comment posted by Stuart Williams on February 18, 2011 at 11:55 PM
the criss-crossing FG lines work well IMO but perhaps could have been made a touch simpler? A lower perspective? the sky is fine but i think the real interest is in the ice.
Registered on December 7, 2007, 247 Posts, 4792 Comments
Comment posted by Catherine Reilly on February 19, 2011 at 4:27 AM
Beautiful, expansive image. The palette of color is so pleasing and inviting of a long look and a big comfortable sigh of pleasure.
Registered on August 16, 2006, 603 Posts, 9192 Comments
Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on February 19, 2011 at 1:46 PM
This is really nice. I like the echo between the ice and the sky with complimentary colors and shapes. Cool ice.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 364 Posts, 22328 Comments
Comment posted by Gino Cortez on February 19, 2011 at 3:34 PM
The larger version provides more detail, and therefore, a better idea of what your intentions might have been. I really like what's going on in the ice: sharp, colorful, and having a lot of leading lines. Contrasted with the amorphous, billowing sky, I could see where these two elements might seem at cross purposes, but they seem to blend to me. I think you've been handsomely rewarded for your 7th version! :toast:
Registered on November 23, 2010, 57 Posts, 396 Comments
Comment posted by Gabi Lach on February 19, 2011 at 8:04 PM
Beautiful! Ice texture and pattern look awesome! Great light and skies too.... Love this!
Registered on May 1, 2007, 101 Posts, 3187 Comments
Comment posted by dean hebert on February 20, 2011 at 5:59 PM
Great shot and processing Raymond! I hate to say it, but I wish there was more ice. I really like how it picks-up the colours of the sky and it has great lines! :toast:
Registered on August 4, 2010, 70 Posts, 1132 Comments