A Delicate Balance
by Robert Beideman
I had the chance to take a month and drive from Boston to Utah/Arizona and back last October, mixing in some business meetings with a good few weeks of solid shooting with friends. Fantastically cathartic...
Here's one of the images from that journey.
For most of you, I'm sure it's a familiar location. But perhaps it's at least a new perspective...
Two exposures iHDR'd. Exposures were made separately for the sky and for the foreground.
Nikon D700
17-35mmf2.8 @17mm
1/4s exposure for the sky (with a lightning trigger)
2s exposure for the rest of the scene (pulled back quite a bit in the end...but I wanted to have the detail available)
All C&C welcome!
Robert
Comments
18 commentsNick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
sorry to be picky, but looking at the large file, it seems that there are quite a few "hard edges" between the rocks/FG and sky, which doesn't really look natural.
which blending method did you use?
Michael
This lightning strike is quite an addition. This is very dramatic.
I'm looking forward to more of your postings from your October trip.
aF
Morkel wasn't being picky, he was being observant. When a post here has 400+ views and only 13 comments, it generally means there are major technical problems with the shot. Here, the dark outlines around the arch etc make this look like two shots spliced together, which as Morkel notes, is unnatural looking. The fg is much too bright compared to the arch. I think if you cant make the blend work, you're better off just using the shorter exposure even if the fg becomes heavily shadowed. If you need help with the blend, either post the two exposures here or email me them, and id be happy to offer suggestions.
Great observations...and it's clear that I've got some work to do. The two exposures were pretty far off of each other (1/4 and 2s), making the blend pretty extreme no matter what I do. Perhaps Stan is on the mark...and the darker exposure may need to stand on it's own.
The processing of this one was also done quite some time ago, before I learned a lot more about lum masks (my masking was pretty extreme, unblended, and hard-edged then). Like I said...I'm hopeful that I've learned a lot since then.
I'll definitely revisit this one in the coming days...hopefully bringing some new knowledge and processing experience to bear...and work to get the blend right (hopefully
Everyone else, thank you for your feedback as well!!!
Robert
Would love to see the stand-alone lightning exposure...