Gallery: LandscapePosted May 26, 20111,145 views36 comments
Another Columbia River Gorge image.. this time I wanted to really convey the feeling of being in the middle of all the greenery, I hope it works for you. Thanks for your thoughts!
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36 comments
Comment posted by Marc Adamus on May 26, 2011 at 1:37 AM
Wow, Floris. Very nice take on this. I know, because I just happened to have taken exactly the same shot a few days prior in the same spot! I like the framing and depth here.
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Comment posted by Nicolaus Wegner on May 26, 2011 at 1:37 AM
Works awesome Floris. Great photograph.
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Comment posted by Floris van Breugel on May 26, 2011 at 1:45 AM
Marc, are you kidding me? haha.. too funny. At least be both know that we came up with it on our own
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Comment posted by Paul Marcellini on May 26, 2011 at 1:57 AM
Nice work and different take. So was it you or Marc that was selectively pruning in there? ;) All joking aside, it was sad to see someone had done that to get a better shot. I might give the Solomon's Seal? a touch more saturation especially since it is backlit.
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Comment posted by Lon Overacker on May 26, 2011 at 2:10 AM
Beautiful Floris. I most definitely get the feeling of just peering out from the thick forest to view this lush scene for the first time. Your framing and comp literally bring me right to the scene. This most certainly works for me and I think you are quite successful with your intentions. No nits here.
Lon
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Comment posted by Igor J. Zaleski on May 26, 2011 at 3:27 AM
At first sight I found the leafs at the top little distracting, but after second one my feeling changed - great framing and it really works for me. Great job!
Igor
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Comment posted by Stuart Williams on May 26, 2011 at 5:10 AM
works well floris. the challenge here is the framing and i don't think perfection really exists. each frame is unique and interesting. nice mood and glowing leaves.
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Comment posted by Helmut Steidl on May 26, 2011 at 7:29 AM
Hello
Wonderfull Capture .... the framing works for me .... great job ....
Best Regards from AUSTRIA
Helmut
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Comment posted by Joseph Rossbach on May 26, 2011 at 8:03 AM
Great job framing this Floris!
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Comment posted by Paul Duval on May 26, 2011 at 8:30 AM
Floris,
Breaking accepted practice I think is often the path to a unique image from what appears to be an oft photographed "place". The challenge is pulling it off successfully and judging from the comments you have and I agree. I think it's all about "framing" the scene but not intruding. well done...
Paul
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Comment posted by Matt Anderson on May 26, 2011 at 8:42 AM
Perfect.
It's almost like I'm sneaking a peak on a secret and forbidden place. ( Until I noticed I'm standing in Elfin Poo, I hear distant snickers)
Great framing and intoxicating colors.
Nothing fluffy about this one!
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Comment posted by Eva McDermott on May 26, 2011 at 8:46 AM
Spectacular color and light Floris. I like your use of the leaves and ferns to frame the falls and stream. Gorgeous scene.
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Comment posted by John Mumaw on May 26, 2011 at 8:57 AM
Beautiful colors and composition. I especially like how the falls aren't the primary focal point (although they're hardly lost here).
Sharp throughout and first rate 'development', too. Focal blend?
Excellent work throughout, Floris!
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Comment posted by Nick Bristol on May 26, 2011 at 9:05 AM
Floris, This is just beautiful. It has the feeling of being so deep in to the forest that no one else has seen this before. That is a special feeling. I love your comp with the ferns and leaves framing the scene. The water looks fantastic too. Beautiful work! and a beautiful place.
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
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Comment posted by Zack Clothier on May 26, 2011 at 9:24 AM
Nice job framing this falls Floris. If it were mine I might take a very small amount off the top to just above the big rock on the far left, as that big leaf is a little distracting, IMO.
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Comment posted by Ed Lowe on May 26, 2011 at 9:53 AM
I love the soft delicate glow in this forest scene and those lush greens are simply superb. This is masterfully done, Floris.
Ed
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Comment posted by Robert Dayton on May 26, 2011 at 10:06 AM
This certainly works for me, Floris. I've yet to see a Gorge shot composed in this
manner. Good framing with the foliage top and bottom creating a window-like effect.
It looks like your exposure is right on.
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Comment posted by Koveh Tavakkol on May 26, 2011 at 10:06 AM
This composition is absolutely stellar Floris. Well done!
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Comment posted by Taylor Reed on May 26, 2011 at 10:07 AM
Very nice work. I often struggle with figuring out how to frame intimate forest scenes of flowing water such as this, and you've provided great inspiration here on what a little creativity can produce.
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Comment posted by Marc Adamus on May 26, 2011 at 10:14 AM
Nope, totally serious. I shot this exact same comp! Amazing....we did indeed come up with it on our own though. The only difference is the background light was brighter in mine.
Paul, the area was a little trampled when we got there, like I had mentioned when we met up. Lots of people go down there now, so who knows? Certainly there was nothing intentional on our parts. No foliage pruning was needed for this perspective. This was pretty easy to come by without touching anything.
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Comment posted by Bill Maile on May 26, 2011 at 10:29 AM
Crazy good Floris, magical capture really.
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Comment posted by Paul Marcellini on May 26, 2011 at 10:40 AM
Marc, Floris, wasn't pointing fingers at all. I know neither of you two would. When we went in a second time(Sat) it had definitely changed and there was very obvious intentional breakage of some ferns and Solomon's Seal. It looked like it was to clear up the line of the stream in a comp. Sorry if it came off wrong on my part.
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Comment posted by Kory Lidstrom on May 26, 2011 at 10:55 AM
I like it. The comp is classic, but it's the framing of the leaves that makes it special.
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Comment posted by Floris van Breugel on May 26, 2011 at 12:25 PM
Thanks everyone, glad to hear it's working as intended!
Marc - the difference might be that I did a LOT of processing up top.. I reduced the background exposure significantly, and brightened the Solomon's as well, since it was getting lost in the jungle. Since no one has mentioned anything, I think I managed to do so in a relatively natural looking way
John - yes two exposures blended for focus.
Zack - I appreciate the feedback, thanks. I see what you mean, I'll think about trimming that down a bit.
Paul - thanks for the feedback - I did take down the saturation on the Solomons, since I was worried it was getting to be too much, I'll let a little more back in.
Regarding the 'prunings' - indeed, there had been some pruning by someone before I got here.. and it made me sad to see that. I did bend a few leaves to the side (leaving them fully alive and happy). Unfortunately this little waterfall simply can't handle the traffic it has been attracting.
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Comment posted by Dietrich Gloger on May 26, 2011 at 1:19 PM
From the thumbnail this looked a bit "forced" but the big version works great. Yes it feels like being there and peeking through the foliage. The bg and the backlit upper leaves look fantastic.
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Comment posted by Phil Pogledich on May 26, 2011 at 1:23 PM
It took me a while to recognize this location, which I think both you and Marc have previously captured superbly. This is definitely different than those shots and quite successful. I'm generally somewhat biased against using branches to help "frame" a scene in this way, but it works pretty well here. The processing does indeed look very natural. It is sad to hear that this wonderful spot is suffering some abuse.
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Comment posted by Rick Lundh on May 26, 2011 at 4:02 PM
Gettin the gorge icons, eh? Well, you did a great job with the comp here. I especially like the 3 ferns in the bottom right of the image. A minor nit would be that fern crossing the waterfall path....but that is a small nit.
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Comment posted by Morris McClung on May 26, 2011 at 4:24 PM
Really gives me the feeling of being there and peering through the greenery. It also feels very "alive."
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Comment posted by Scott Smorra on May 26, 2011 at 9:41 PM
I really like this comp Floris. As others have noted, it's like you are peering through the ferns at a secret waterfall. Everything looks great to me. It's sad to hear about the pruning...wish people had more respect for a pristine area like this.
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Comment posted by Tom Nevesely on May 27, 2011 at 10:44 AM
Very nice Floris! This photo has a very relaxing feel to it. Just perfect!
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Comment posted by Cliff Dodge on May 27, 2011 at 11:02 AM
The foreground ferns make a nice lead in to the crick and falls and the upper leaves keep the eye right where it needs to be, right up the crick.
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Comment posted by Anil Rao on May 27, 2011 at 11:04 AM
This has turned out very nicely. The presentation looks great to my eyes and personally. I don't see a need to increase he saturation. The composition, especially the manner in which the waterflow has been framed is awesome.
Lovely work, once again, Floris.
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Comment posted by Sean Bagshaw on May 27, 2011 at 12:27 PM
Love the translucent glow coming through the leaves above. I love the frame in a frame comp. A perfect window to the scene. It feels slightly tipped to the left to me but it may be that the trees are just leaning that way.
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Comment posted by Mark Pelton on May 27, 2011 at 11:32 PM
awesome comp, Floris.
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Comment posted by Stan Rose on May 28, 2011 at 8:33 PM
The fern crossing the falls kills the shot. ruins it. dead on arrival
Ok seriously it is a minor nit, but otherwise this is pretty cool--i like!
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Comment posted by Danny Laureys on May 28, 2011 at 9:19 PM
Excellent!!!!!
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Comments
36 commentsLon
Igor
Wonderfull Capture .... the framing works for me .... great job ....
Best Regards from AUSTRIA
Helmut
Breaking accepted practice I think is often the path to a unique image from what appears to be an oft photographed "place". The challenge is pulling it off successfully and judging from the comments you have and I agree. I think it's all about "framing" the scene but not intruding. well done...
Paul
It's almost like I'm sneaking a peak on a secret and forbidden place. ( Until I noticed I'm standing in Elfin Poo, I hear distant snickers)
Great framing and intoxicating colors.
Nothing fluffy about this one!
Sharp throughout and first rate 'development', too. Focal blend?
Excellent work throughout, Floris!
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
Ed
manner. Good framing with the foliage top and bottom creating a window-like effect.
It looks like your exposure is right on.
Paul, the area was a little trampled when we got there, like I had mentioned when we met up. Lots of people go down there now, so who knows? Certainly there was nothing intentional on our parts. No foliage pruning was needed for this perspective. This was pretty easy to come by without touching anything.
Marc - the difference might be that I did a LOT of processing up top.. I reduced the background exposure significantly, and brightened the Solomon's as well, since it was getting lost in the jungle. Since no one has mentioned anything, I think I managed to do so in a relatively natural looking way
John - yes two exposures blended for focus.
Zack - I appreciate the feedback, thanks. I see what you mean, I'll think about trimming that down a bit.
Paul - thanks for the feedback - I did take down the saturation on the Solomons, since I was worried it was getting to be too much, I'll let a little more back in.
Regarding the 'prunings' - indeed, there had been some pruning by someone before I got here.. and it made me sad to see that. I did bend a few leaves to the side (leaving them fully alive and happy). Unfortunately this little waterfall simply can't handle the traffic it has been attracting.
Lovely work, once again, Floris.
Ok seriously it is a minor nit, but otherwise this is pretty cool--i like!