Gallery: LandscapePosted July 6, 2011302 views8 comments
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Comment posted by Barry Ashenhurst on July 7, 2011 at 4:22 AM
Lovely Tomajko. My only criticism would be the amount of shadow in the foreground, which for me has no intrinci interest. Shot with a slightly different composition, I think this would make a wonderful editorial dps opener.
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Comment posted by Barry Ashenhurst on July 7, 2011 at 4:23 AM
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Comment posted by Dorin Bofan on July 7, 2011 at 8:31 AM
I agree with Barry on this one, Verdon. I don't know if it was possible or not, but getting closer to that pool might have provided a better and simpler composition. I also see some slight haloing around the baobabs. Nevertheless, this is a stunning scene and you are so fortunate to have seen it with your own eyes.
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Comment posted by Pedro Bento on July 7, 2011 at 8:42 AM
Nice place, but this shadow on FG kills a little bit the image, and if it were possible I'll try to not cut the reflected trees!
PB
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Comment posted by Hamed Musharbak on July 7, 2011 at 1:29 PM
very nice place indeed, i think if you avoid the shadow in the front it will be much better
thanks for sharing ur art work
Hamed
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Comment posted by Mark Metternich on July 7, 2011 at 5:11 PM
I think the image here is intriguing. Nice shot.
I do think it could benefit from some more interesting light/atmosphere, but know it is hard to find in this location sometimes. It also seems slightly tilted to the right?
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Comment posted by Tony Kuyper on July 7, 2011 at 9:27 PM
Neat "forest" that looks like it's from another planet. Agree with the comment that the amount of foreground shadow seems excessive.
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Comment posted by Kah Kit Yoong on July 8, 2011 at 12:15 AM
I would just crop the shadow out. Lovely light on the boabs.
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8 commentsPB
thanks for sharing ur art work
Hamed
I do think it could benefit from some more interesting light/atmosphere, but know it is hard to find in this location sometimes. It also seems slightly tilted to the right?