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Morning Oriole
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Morning Oriole

by Howard Cheek

Gallery: AvianPosted September 13, 2011152 views17 comments
This is a second version of a recent Orchard Oriole post here.
http://www.naturephotographers.net/imagecritique/ic.cgi?a=vp&pr=179470&CGISESSID=9764cbe4d7a9495760b4658fc4d58473&u=32062
I wondered if you could let me know which you prefer?
I've cloned out the myrtle leaves up top, and in this instance the bird is presenting face forward.
Thank you in advance :smile:
F/7.1, 1/500th, ISO 500, 1D M3, 300mm f/2.8 + 1.4x ext, no flash around 8:30 & clear.

Comments

17 comments
Comment posted by Hans Overduin on September 13, 2011 at 9:10 AM
Hello Howard - difficult question. I am tempted to choose for the first, but they are not all that comparable. What I do like about the first is that some more of the environment is shown. The 2nd post emphasizes the subject more, however I feel at the same time that there's a bit too much emptiness in the upper part of the image for my taste. All in all I'd go for the first image. That all said, they both are great obviously :smile: , cheers, Hans
Registered on August 31, 2011, 491 Posts, 3807 Comments
Comment posted by John Blumenkamp on September 13, 2011 at 10:54 AM
Hi Howard... I like them both, but if I had to choose it would be the first. I like the look up and out of frame, and the inclusion of the leaves on the first makes me wonder if the oriole is looking at something further up the branch, etc. Both are nice!
Registered on February 26, 2011, 58 Posts, 313 Comments
Comment posted by Richard Ditch on September 13, 2011 at 12:44 PM
This is nice, but I too prefer the first version.
Registered on November 1, 2003, 1031 Posts, 12705 Comments
Comment posted by Philip Hodgkins on September 13, 2011 at 3:22 PM
I like this better, without a doubt. I love the head turn and eye contact, which really shows the personality of the bird. My one nit is the top feels a bit empty. Perhaps a little crop off the top?
Registered on July 24, 2006, 2741 Posts, 12349 Comments
Comment posted by Jim Hackley on September 13, 2011 at 4:50 PM
I happen to like this one better but I might be inclined to crop a little off the top and maybe left to make it more of a vertical crop. I like this one better because of the look from the bird with eye contact and the pose with both feet on different branches. The larger image has some good feather detail on those difficult yellows. Nice job getting this shot, way to go.
Registered on September 17, 2009, 302 Posts, 5535 Comments
Comment posted by Matt Shellenberg on September 13, 2011 at 10:00 PM
The light in this image is just awesome, Howard. And I really like the slight head tilt. A nice background that really compliments this Oriole. Superb.

I cannot pick which I like best. They are both really, really nice images.
Registered on February 6, 2008, 168 Posts, 3118 Comments
Comment posted by Ray Whitt on September 13, 2011 at 10:37 PM
Love this image Howard. The pose is great like the little tilt of the head. Wonderful detail and colors and the background really compliments the Oriole.

Ray
Registered on May 27, 2011, 92 Posts, 2619 Comments
Comment posted by Roger Leekam on September 13, 2011 at 10:46 PM
Howard, this is the kind of shot which I think of as a wall hanger. it has atmosphere produced by light, color and background contrast. On top of that is a framework of the bird's legs and the branches - diamonds and V's. I much prefer this highly saleable image if you want. Excellent work!
Registered on May 28, 2009, 83 Posts, 646 Comments
Comment posted by Gary Gulash on September 14, 2011 at 12:48 AM
The two images are quite different. I think the first version is a more classic, almost traditional composition. This second view is a bit more fun, in your face sort of pose. Both are equally strong in their own way. How's that for non-committal? BTW, nice light, background and sharpness!
Registered on January 28, 2005, 879 Posts, 12098 Comments
Comment posted by Roger Leekam on September 14, 2011 at 7:21 AM
Howard, I just looked at this again & I wonder how cropping a tiny bit off the top would work.
Registered on May 28, 2009, 83 Posts, 646 Comments
Comment posted by Howard Cheek on September 14, 2011 at 7:50 AM
Hi Roger,
If I had the Mark IV with the extra res I would consider it. But I work within the constraints of a 10.1MB DSLR
Note the 5.6MB of this post. Further cropping would degrade the image too much I'm afraid.
I plan to upgrade by the end of next year..
Registered on July 24, 2008, 1201 Posts, 10758 Comments
Comment posted by Nate Chappell on September 14, 2011 at 3:12 PM
They are both excellent but I prefer the better eye contact in this one, love the comp as well with the forked branch, lovely shot Howard :toast:
Registered on February 1, 2006, 1158 Posts, 19528 Comments
Comment posted by Charles Gangas on September 14, 2011 at 3:32 PM
Howard- I think Gary said it well and I'll have to echo his non-committal. Wonderful light with this image as in the first, but here I love the gaze and the drama created by the bird straddling the branches.
Registered on August 12, 2009, 544 Posts, 2414 Comments
Comment posted by Ashley Vincent on September 15, 2011 at 1:42 AM
I think they both make for lovely images Howard, so I refuse to choose ;^)

The morning light and blurred background lend well to bot pictures. Although you might have intentionally been going for a more warm and softish look, if this were mine I'd certainly apply some some selective sharpening to the Oriole as well as it's perch.

Whatever the case, both are enjoyable pictures to look at!
Registered on March 1, 2011, 154 Posts, 2083 Comments
Comment posted by Robert Holguin on September 15, 2011 at 3:29 PM
Excellent shot. I personally like this one better. Just because of the pose. Well done.
Registered on January 25, 2011, 44 Posts, 294 Comments
Comment posted by May Haga on September 15, 2011 at 7:20 PM
Great shot Howard. Love the background, the pose and the look of curiosity on the face of the bird.
May
Registered on February 22, 2007, 714 Posts, 8470 Comments
Comment posted by Cheryl Molennor on September 20, 2011 at 10:55 PM
Love it Howard. The pose, the light and that face oohh. :toast: :toast:
Registered on June 30, 2009, 300 Posts, 5051 Comments