Gallery: FloraPosted September 16, 201139 views4 comments
Sorry for the title, I keep struggling with it...
Took it yesterday in Winter Gardens, Aberdeen, Scotland ( nice to be back)
IS0 200, 1/250, Nikon D90, 2.8,
Comments as usual highly appreciated
sin
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Comment posted by Pat Sampson on September 16, 2011 at 8:20 PM
Sindy,
I have disposition against foreground blur in a subject unless it just becomes a soft wash. So for my tastes the blur is a bit of the problem and I'd probably also like more structure in the composition. See what the others say though. It may just be me.
pat
Registered on May 19, 2007, 953 Posts, 15989 Comments
Comment posted by Steve Kennedy on September 16, 2011 at 9:00 PM
Hi Sindy! I like what you are trying to do here. Its creative and attractive. The colors are really nice as is the back ground. My 2 suggestions would be to have "Pinky" a little lower in the frame by raising the camera slightly (this would put the 2 blooms on more of a diagonal) and add a little bit more depth of field with the focus closer to the front of the bloom to give it more definition.
Registered on March 9, 2009, 79 Posts, 676 Comments
Comment posted by Gary Yeoh on September 17, 2011 at 2:52 AM
Sindy:
Interesting comp. I like the OOF big sister. Wish for a little more DOF on pinky though.
Registered on September 1, 2009, 588 Posts, 8184 Comments
Comment posted by Bob&Charly Nelson on September 19, 2011 at 1:24 PM
I like the coming at ya feel of the composition Sindy. I suppose a little more DOF might be nice, but then there might be too much detail shown.
Bob
Registered on October 27, 2005, 289 Posts, 4202 Comments
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4 commentsI have disposition against foreground blur in a subject unless it just becomes a soft wash. So for my tastes the blur is a bit of the problem and I'd probably also like more structure in the composition. See what the others say though. It may just be me.
pat
Interesting comp. I like the OOF big sister. Wish for a little more DOF on pinky though.
Bob