Rocky Mountain Miracle
by Stan Rose
This was taken about 100 yards away from where Kane E took his shot (posted a couple hours ago), he was on the other side of the ridge that you can see on the right side of this shot. We hiked a couple hours in the rain hoping for a slim shot at some sunrise light, and the gamble paid off when we bushwacked up this ridge just in time for a few minutes of miraculous warm light at sunrise! Rain, sleet and snow were coming in sheets right at me as i took this shot from an overlook on the north side of the ridge; of the 12 or so exposures i took, this was the cleanest (rain/sleet streaks are visible in some of the others, and some water drops--i wiped the lens just before this shot) Fortunately, i only needed one exposure, double processed in RAW for maximum range.
Rocky Mountain Ntl Park, above Lake Helene, Sat morning.
5Dmkii; 24mm TSE; 1/2s at f/16
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Comments
32 commentsNick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
I agree with the others about the center placement of that sapling, it does pull my eye there. I also like Doug's suggestion of reducing the reds in that sapling, that would help.
I also think cropping about halfway to the sapling from the right and a little off the top would make this more balanced and remove the sapling from the center of the frame. Beautiful light though, your efforts definitely paid off!
I like the placement of the tree, which makes it a part of the scene yet not in the traditional spot often favored by landscape photographers.
Reading all the comments, I want to say that the tree in the foreground is not disturbing for me, instead in my opinion it makes for a kind of anchore within the composition with strong diagonals. Maybe darkening this element a bit and pulling down its saturation might help me to focus on the delightful background, where the delicately lit rocks are the main area of interest for me in your image. Thanks for sharing.
Peter
Chris
had you not explained the weather conditions, I would have had no idea
what they were like. The slight haze in the BG is a plus for me. Obviously,
you composed with a strong fg element. I should think that this might
make a beautiful large print.
While the light is spectacular I do believe the even light isn't pulling one in. Darkening would improve dramatics but I too am not sold on the centered tree. Im mostly looking at the lake and above so it isn't a huge issue. When I do look near the bottom in does anchor the eye a bit though. Interesting takes and fun to view yours and Kanes. I do believe yours hold more natural weight and think his heavy blending isn't my flavor. Im sure in years to come blending will be old news. Hey thats life.
Thanks for sharing
After all its about you being there enjoying the moment that matters most
A glorious scene and I think you did very well in capturing the moment. I like the reddish hue and the little tree doesn't bother. It blends and merges a bit with the scene so it's not really a distraction for me. No nits, although I like Kane's idea of more granite foreground. Can you go back and re-shoot?
Lon
Thanks guys!
Kane--you're right, i was terrified of missing the light if i messed with shift here, ive gotta get more comfortable with that...
I may try darkening the fg a bit--i used the double RAW mainly to brighten the fg, but that may have been a mistake!
I'm 50/50 on whether I would have liked the small FG bush to be a bit more to the RHS
Still - wish this was mine