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Sorry, no criticism....I like the shot a lot....
and you are shooting film?
Very interesting...

Can't find any real criticism here - looks very nice to me. I'm just barely awake, but this looks very pretty to my eyes. If I had anything, I wish there was slightly more room on the left.

No criticism from me either, Lon. This is very nice. I think your comp works really well and I enjoy the movement of the water. I especially like the looks of the water at the top left side. The contrast between the flowing water and the somewhat diagonal lines in the rocks really works well together.

Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI

I am liking the middle of the frame, but the lower right rock is throwing out the composition for me. I think I would prefer it cropped at the bottom, just above that rock.

The crossing lines of the water and rocks behind work so well! I like this for the subtle contrasts in textures, tones, and colors.
A lovely intimate, Lon.

Lon,

I have to agree with Harley. But in addition to that, the dark area on the left bothers me as well. Possibly a crop from that side as well.

Beautiful intimate little waterfall shot Lon. The only thing I would suggest would be to tone down those white highlights in the foreground water a bit. They're not blown, but they seem a little too bright to my eye, and they pull my eye right to that spot.

I think Harley's square crop suggestion has merit, but I actually like the detail of that foreground rock. And as far as what Youssef says, rather than cropping the dark area out, maybe lightening it would be a better solution.

Overall, a nice little scene!

It is a beautiful image. I wonder if the water is flowing over a log and not rocks.

Thanks for the comments and observations folks. I struggled with the balance in this comp. And actually it's a crop, so there is more room on the left, however it's just more black space and I thought it wasn't adding to the image. Lightening the dark area on the left isn't really an option. Can't create detail when there is none... ;-) Interesting that there are two ways to look at - either too tight on the left or need more room and detail. I think I'll toss in the un-edited and un-cropped version for reference.

I like the idea of a crop Mr. H. and have played around with that. I think it works as an alternative comp and the compromise is losing the fan-out and texture of the water. Choices, choices.

Charlie - great observation. It is in fact a log that the water is tumbling over. I guess I never thought it might be perceived that way because of course I was there and already know what it is.

Thanks for the comments folks. I'm thinking that with a number of varying opinions, that tells me this isn't the strongest of images..
Appreciate the open feedback.

Lon

ps. so you can see quite a distance between point A and point B. Oh, btw, even with my original crop I did a little bit of cloning in the URC to put a little rock texture in rather than having a black corner.

I'm not sure why it being a log makes it a more interesting image but somehow it does for me.

The crop suggestions are interesting. If applied they would move the image much more toward abstract and be fundamentally different than what you are presenting. I like the foreground rock because it explains the water flow, and the dark left side doesn't bother me at all.

A lovely intimate streamscape Lon. The flow of the water over those striated rocks is beautifully done. I like this comp just as it is with that flow being complimented by the foaming pool and rock.

What I really like here are the vertical lines created where the water leaves the log (which I also thought was a rock until I saw the repost), as well as the lines in the water and on the log. Therefore, I like the idea of a crop off the bottom. These scenes remind me of filling up water bottles while backpacking in the Sierra.

I like tighter versions of flowing water like this. Nicely done.

Lon,
I'm a sucker for water veils, many of the log in stream shots I've attempted look more apocalyptic than pleasant and peaceful. This pulls that off. I can hear the rushing water looking at this.

Paul

gotta say, i like your first version best, and the foreground rock framing the scene. i dont like seeing too much of the top of the falls, feels like it detracts from the peaceful action below. i like the warmer colors in the first version more than the the blues of the second. again, love the textures in your waterfall images.

I am glad that you didn't discard this after all. The composition is beautiful. I love it because of how it showcases the dynamics of falling water while retaining a strong abstract quality as well.

The color, tonality and detail are great. Like our esteemed colleague Mr. Harley, I find the rock on the LRC to be a bit distracting. Cropping from the bottom removes a lot of the interesting detail in the water and also removes the clue as to why the flow itself is doing what it does. Cropping also makes the image too tight, in my opinion.

I love the concept, Lon, but I wouldn't put this one in the your top tier.

--P

Beautiful composition Lon!!

Sorry for tuning in late. I like the scene, but am equally impressed with the transformation from the post original. You really pulled a good image out here. It gets at that "computer" type vision that is as important as seeing things in the field. Maybe they really aren't all that different, I'm not sure, but it helps to be able to do both.

A lovely intimate waterfall scene, Lon. It's interesting to see the original compared to the finished image. There's lots to like in the image, like the wonderful log and water textures. The balance doesn't seem quite as good as your previous comp's, but it is still very engaging. It almost feels like the left side of an image that's been cut in half. Perhaps it's the angle of view causing this or maybe the lower right rock being in the frame is throwing off the balance a little. A lovely scene none the less.

A belated critique, Lon. I say, leave it alone. You can drive yourself nuts trying to improve upon an already beautiful image. Initially I was wondering what the URC was, but your earlier images answer that. The water flowing over the log is gorgeous, and that's what the eye focuses on anyway.