Leaf at Dawn
by dean hebert
Early morning on Harrison lake. Yes, I placed the leaf there but it was already on the shore nearby so I don't think that's cheating. I like the mood of this photo but I'm not to sure about the comp. I also thought about cloning in a larger moon but I didn't take a closer shot so I've left it as-is.
3-image composite for DOF and dynamic range.
All comments and critiques welcome.
Comments
3 commentsEven though the leaf feels a bit placed, I think it provides a wonderful color counterbalance and strong compositional element. And even though the moon is small, it's important and I like it's presence too. The clouds work well to keep the sky from being empty and overall I think this is a strong composition.
Lon
I would like to see a larger version of this image. I am looking at it on small and not very good monitor. To me, it seems like a pretty large mass of grey in comparison to the foreground. But I think there are some pretty nice traces of color in the sky, which might change my thinking on the overall image. While I agree with Lon that the clouds and the moon add enough interest to make the image stand as a whole, this is one of those shots where I see at least one "image within the image." I wonder if a crop just above the tree line would give this image more "in your face" impact?