Ocean Waterfall+alt comp
by Chip Phillips
I was hoping to get some feedback on processing, etc. and preference for this or the other comp down in the comments. This was a pretty difficult one for me, with all the dynamic range and spray going everywhere. It's a hand blend and was shot with my Canon 5D mark II, Canon 16-35mm f2.8L II lens with polarizer. Thanks for any feedback.
Chip
Comments
39 commentsBeautiful shot.
just my humble thoughts.
There are a lot of great elements at play and I think the first version is more impressionable.
Great job on the blend.
EDIT: Now that I see there are two versions, just wanted to say that I prefer the first one.
Outstanding image.
I would be proud to have either in my home,
but - since I saw #1 first... that is my preference.
Comp and subject are outstanding, processing seems first rate.
Either is excellent, I love #1.
Nick Bristol
Lone Rock, WI
You've spaced the rock formations from front to back in a way that really gives
this a 3D effect. I like the spray falls to the left and the sunburst effect to the right.
There's also a wave splash in the back that you caught at an opportune time.
That along with the FG water and spray falls to the left really gives a feeling
of movement. I can almost hear the sound of the ocean in this image.
Chris
The warmth and colour are so inviting. as for processing it looks natural to me. Tough stuff to achieve, well done!
I like both versions. If I were to pick, I would go with the first, because shows the falls on both sides of the composition. The second one has a cleaner look to it, but the first one seems to be a little more exotic and strikes my imagination more. I like the processing better in the first image, but you might try a touch more contrast in the first image. The starburst in the second image seems much more saturated. In my opinion, I would back off the color in that area of the image. Despite those minor nitpicks, I am truly impressed with these images. They are outstanding!
I prefer the original post over the cropped version.
Sandy
I think overall I like the 1st one because of the way all the elements of the comp lure the viewer through the scene. Waterfall on the left and a hint of same in the fg shadows to the lower right; the sea spray catching the sunlight; and on out to the sea stacks and the sun with the dazzle of the starburst/rays. And blue and gold just can't be beat.
Congrats on the Pick for this! Well deserved.